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no problem, it's good. Though I'd like a small epilogue where the other bandits break down, beg, beg and beg, and are taken as town prostitutes to make up for the damage they caused, maybe one or two cleanly beheaded, the least harmful/meek accomplices commutted to prostitution.

We see them several weeks later in the brothel, popular visit of many youths to enjoy them.
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