Glad to hear there will be more! Your writing is great, and I enjoyed the story.

The only thing that comes to my mind is that she somehow pees three feet into the air, yet there is no mention of the knight undressing her. I assume she was clothed from the start, which would stop the urine.

This is really nitpicking though, I really look forward to more, and hopefully a bit longer, stories. I love little girls being snuffed!