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The concept is based on both myths and proven research on a barbaric practice that has sexually stimulating potential. I attempted to harness that potential in a brief and easily dismissed bit of fiction that, if moved to be technically accurate, means the story idea is fatally flawed. If it doesn't work for you, then please move along to something more satisfying for you, stories that bring you pleasure. That, after all, is the point to the exercise, is it not?

If you are unable to suspend disbelief, and I fully understand such people exist, the 2nd paragraph gave you all the information necessary to bail out and move on, as it describes an extremely unlikely situation in which Rachel is entrapped.

Continuing this conversation is singularly unrewarding, and I'm going to get on with my life. Enjoy good health and prosper.

Oops, that's dangerously close to an idea borrowed from a ridiculously unlikely and unsupportable concept for a science fiction story not worth producing. The late Eugene Wesley Roddenberry must have been a delusional fool, thinking people would enjoy a TV series with a misspelled title, Star Trek.
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