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>>8597

To be honest, I'm not sure yet where to take this story in the end. I have so many ideas, and some of them are incompatible to each other.

I likely won't have her impaled on a 1 foot or even wider pole. That'd be quite grotesque, and almost certainly fatal unless she spent half a life time practicing and stretching, and most of all, it would break the realism. Tatjana is one of those slender tall Russian girls, she could likely *hide* behind a one foot pole. She wouldn't be impaled, she'd be pulled over it like a sleeve.


I am trending towards a size that still lets her breathe and won't break any bones. Although, as a compromise, she could likely ride a spike type pole, which is thin at the top, but gets a lot wider at the bottom. That way anyone could always slide down as far as she can take it. Might be a fun party toy :)

Some of the ideas bring in other fetishes to the game. After all if you keep sticking things in, you might as well take other things out. I recently have a fable for uterus prolapses, but didn't get to incorporate them in any story yet. You could so nicely run a few skewers through the womb while it's dangling between ones legs...

Also, the many metal bits through her breasts just beg for someone to pull on them hard enough to make the entire thing rip off. That'd be permanent damage though which would severely affect any practices further towards the end...

And then we have the end. Should she live or should she die? If she dies, it's all on. She could turn into a living breathing bloody heap, turned inside out and leftside right, gurgling and twitching before being guided into a meat grinder.
But if she's to live, I'm tempted to keep her somewhat whole. You can't really enjoy your secret fetish if you are completely unable to live a normal life during the day. This isn't a scifi world were everyone tends to runs around with their brains in a jar (Allthough Poguemahoney would probably like that)

@Pogue: Yes, piercing her head and maybe even the brain is definitely among the "maybe" list, too. A thin rod shouldn't do too much damage there, should it?

Btw, I just had to think about this old Chinese torture and execution method, letting a bamboo sprout grow through the victim.
That's certainly something Tatjana would likely want to try out. Gardening is fun if your plant grows straight up and over 3 feet a day (though she'd still have to sit still for an awful long time, someone would have to keep her company and entertained with some other spikes)
I think that's something that definitely should be in!
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