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First story was really good except that it coud have more focus on gore, but second was a bit hard to follow because of numerous characters and actions and also this story twist when they cant decides who will kill who.

For a sequel I woud like more torture than fighting because fighting is too fast to follow.

Do you have any more chapters written already?
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