tSade, I dunno if you still take a look at this thread but I've been reading this story off and on for the past week.

I've also been coming to mind blowing orgasms off and on for the last week. I'm deeply sorry I didn't notice it when you were actively posting the story but this piece is amazingly good.

I also have a theory as to why few people commented; this story seems to be more geared for women to enjoy and this site is probably visited by more men. I've no proof, of course, but it's just a hunch. Still, with how the sex and gore scenes are described I feel the flow is more akin to how a woman enjoys perverse works. Loaded slowly over the course of several moments ebbing and flowing about the climax as opposed to consistently building up to the big scene.

Then again, I'm not a writer just a fan.