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Ah, that may be as I didn't check my previous message.

As for the second idea, well, it might be out of character, yes. Although I'm not entirely sure honestly. Essentially, the way I understand it, those organisation more often than not have the same goals, which are to get the strongest Pokemon and become the most powerful group. Did you watch the very first pokemon movie by any chance, with Mew and Mewtwo, which was based around Trainers and Pokemon being kidnapped on an island and their pokemon being cloned.

Essentially I was thinking something similar. Team Galactic kidnap pokemon to experiment/clone/brainwash, as well as the Trainers to have some sort of blackmail leverage against the pokemon if they disobey them. And by the time she confronts them, the evil organisation about finished their experiments and are finally ready to attack the top 4/pokemon league/other gym leaders and start their quest for world domination. And the execution thing would be more of a disturbing, public message to announce themselves to the world and let the people know they mean business. Sort of making an example of her so to speak.

As for the first idea, yes, that one I do remember, and it's still the same in essence I suppose. Though I remember you mentioned that the fighting itself scene was the main obstacle for writing it, hence it might be enough to scrap that fighting scene altogether and set in once the battle is either in its very final stage or already decided? That way you wouldn't have to touch on the fighting scene at all and could instead focus on the end?

However, yes, i do admit that I'm not sure if there are many other options besides those two. I mean, in a pokemon universe, if it's supposed to be a non-consensual snuff story, the only factions I can see doing that would either be an evil organisation, if we assume they are less cartoonish and more like a real-life, underground crime/mafia syndicate, or a trainer/criminal acting alone.

I suppose if we were to stick with a criminal acting on his own, rather than a fight, it could also be something like a home invasion instead, and catching her in her sleep for example?

Or something entirely different, like say, if we were to tweak the pokemon universe itself a bit. For example, imagine that a gym leader, once they receive a set number of defeats, say 15, is executed due to incompetence and replaced with another candidate. And she just suffered her last defeat and is due to be replaced?
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