>>8809
Got it, I'll see what I can do.

>>8811
>>8814
Sorry, but none of these ideas really strike a chord with me. Even if his plan is already in motion, Cyrus wouldn't create this kind of publicity by publicly killing someone; if anything, he'd torture and brainwash her, and the 'example' he makes of Maylene is her becoming his obedient, emotionless (because ridding the world of all emotion is like his end goal) minion. I'm not sure about the other ideas either; both executions for incompetence, and 'death battles' even more so, would require some rather humane methods of death if they're supposed to be legal or official in any way. And even then

Yes, I know I'm being difficult, but writing is difficult, ten times more so if you're not 'feeling' the story you're supposed to do. The only thing I could think of would some variation of home invasion, with the killer (either a particularly vengeful challenger, or just a random serial killer) either murdering Maylene (or whomever) right then and there, or kidnapping her to torture and/or rape before killing her. Which would also pretty much give you free rein on what kind of pain he (or she?) can inflict on Maylene. That sound like something that works? (In which case I obviously need like all the details).