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First off, sorry about yet another text wall. I seem to have difficulty keeping my replies short and concise. =/

Anyways, hm, I'm not sure honestly. I can see where you're coming from with gym leaders not wanting to meddle in other states' affairs, but I do think that, for Maylene specifically, such actions might be conceivable.

My knowledge might be faulty since it really has been years since I last checked the canon, but if I remember correctly; while generally being a fairly kind-hearted personality with low self-esteem, Maylene also has a very strong urge to do good. And in canon she did have trouble dealing with Team Galactic in her town until Ash (or the protagonist in the games) came along and helped out with the issue, which she was very grateful for.

So if we were to assume that she was traveling different regions to discover new pokemon and grow stronger, and in one of the regions she passes through she sees the locals having trouble with evil grunts/thugs, I could definitely see her good-hearted nature winning over logic, leading to her wanting to help fight against the evil faction even if she knows she shouldn't be doing so considering her position as foreign gym leader. Though in her mind she'd likely do the locals a favour and gain their gratitude much how Ash had gained her gratitude for helping her out when she needed help.

It might even be that, considering Ash is from Kanto, seeing his home-region in trouble, she feels obligated to help out of gratefulness towards Ash and to repay the debt she owes him. If that makes sense?

So I do think it might be logical for her to interfere if she was to travel through Kanto. Especially since she is fairly naive too as far as I can tell, so she might not be entirely aware about politics between states.

Also, while immersion is important to make a story more powerful emotionally, the immersion shouldn't interfere with the kinky and exciting elements themselves, I think. Personally I feel the characters are the most important part of a story as they are reasonably for making a story come to life and a substance. But that's just me, and of course a realistic setting is important too. ^^"

With that said, I suppose my point is that I really, really would like to see it with Maylene if somehow possible, simply because she is by far my favorite female character and though I love immersion regarding universe, if we could manage to combine any evil faction plus Maylene it really would be perfect for me personally.

However, if I really can't convince you and you think there'd be no way Maylene would interfere with Kanto thugs or no faction other than Team Rocket would conceivably go to such lengths as to kill trainers who get in their way; or you're just not interested in writing her character, again, that's perfectly understandable.

Though I do admit that, in that case, the range of possible characters is somewhat small for me. My second favorite female character is Roxie,, who's practically the polar opposite to Maylene as far as personality is concerned, but I suppose we'd run into the same issue as with Maylene. And beyond her, if I had to chose one female gym leader from Kanto/Johto I like most, I suppose it would be Janine (the badass ninja/poison trainer). You also suggested Lyra, and even though I'm not really familiar/remember her, the character artwork does look pretty, so if you wanted to write her instead I'd be happy with that too. =)

As far as sexual content is concerned. Well, to be honest, I kind of prefer to leave you as much creative freedom as you want, and at the same time I also wouldn't want to request too many different things as I'm not sure how much/long you're willing to write and I don't want to bombard you with ideas. So I guess my point is, I don't really have all that many requests.

But let me list a few things I'd be most curious about seeing. However, mind you that these are purely suggestions. At the end of the day none would be mandatory and I'd be happy with you picking and omitting whichever you like. Of course I'd also be more than happy with you adding any ideas you'd enjoy yourself. As I said, creative freedom is very important to me, and if you can write a story you thoroughly enjoy yourself, the result would always be better than if I were to ask you to include certain elements at all cost.

Anyways, here a couple suggestions still, to at least give you a better idea of what I enjoy. Regarding the snuff method I think I'd be most interested in seeing a decapitation scene, either with her sitting in the leader's lap, facing away from him, and him reaching around her and cutting through her throat from behind, or something like her being tossed on the ground, either on her front or back, and her head being chopped through with an axe. Bonus points if that axe wasn't fully sharpened and it required one or two additional attempts to get through, putting her in even more agony and terror. ^^"

Beyond that, I guess I already mentioned I'd enjoy the public execution element, with her death being recorded on camera. Whether that tape would be broadcasted publicly or is simply a private keepsake for the leader doesn't matter too much, but if she was aware of being filmed in her most dire and degrading moments it would add a nice element I think.

As far as the grunts go, that's entirely up to you. They can be male or female, young or old. And I'm pretty flexible on the abuse as well. Rape would probably take place considering her gender, and it certainly would be enjoyable to read, but it isn't mandatory at all if you want to keep the story shorter and focus more on the snuff scene itself. Though if we were to add rape, I'd be particularly partial towards using dangerous objects rather than the assailants using their genitals/cocks. I find it quite exhilarating if a rapist doesn't rape out of physical need and satisfaction by using is own cock, but simply because he gets off sadistic pleasure of seeing the victim in pain regardless of the situation. Hence raping her with, say, a broken bottle or a baseball bat could be quite intense, especially if that item was, even after the rape, still lodged inside her during the remaining abuse/death scene. Sort of painting the mental image of a broken, abused victim being beheaded with the broken bottle still protruding from her lower parts. ^^"

Regarding other forms of abuse. Hmm, I admit I'm a bit of a foot fetishists, not in a sexual manner but in terms of humiliation. So I think I'd enjoy if she was forced to kiss or lick the leader's feet/shoes in a subservient manner, along with begging and pleading for mercy perhaps? This could also be spiced up with a sort of master/pet element I think, say she is forced to wear a leash and collar and kneel on all fours, along with a blindfold or so? Likewise I also enjoy degrading verbal speech. Though to return to the feet thing, while I'm not really interested in a proper foot fetish in a sexual manner, I do like feet as aesthetics, so if you could mention hers (assuming she's barefoot or nude) once or twice through tiny description like the curling of toes or twisting of ankles, or how cold the ground feels under her soles, that would be much appreciated. Although I think that applies to any bodypart. It's just that I have noticed that writers usually pay particularly less attention to feet than say hands, facial features/expressions or erogenous zones. Hence I just wanted to mention that.

I also enjoy physical violence, within reason, nothing too intense like skinning or disembowling. Perhaps instead something like knocking a couple teeth out, cutting up the face/cutting off nipples/hair to make her feel ugly and taking away her femininity from her in any way possible? As well as using dull objects like fists or a baseball bat to dent in her vagina after they are done (to return to the taking away femininity aspect) or generally littering her body with one or two bruises?

Hmm, what else. To return to the snuff scene. I know you said it's not your cup of tea, but I also quite like the concept of losing bowels/bladder upon death or out of fear. Not because I find those excrements themselves appealing, but simply because I enjoy the element of shame that comes with it. You know like, how as a woman, you're very concerned with looking pretty, respectable and painting a good image of yourself to others. But accidentally releasing your excrements in front of others just crushes that image of attempted control and beauty entirely, making you look filthy and disgusting. Which I find quite exciting as a fantasy. So even though I understand if you don't want to write it as it doesn't appeal to you, if you could add it in a sentence or two that would also be much appreciated.

And one last thing I can think of, regarding setting. I think I'd enjoy if the place the abuse takes place at was quite grimy and filthy. Maybe a dirty backalley, or a rundown dungeon cell, or something like an abandoned warehouse/garage etc? So generally I'd love for the mood and atmosphere to be quite dark and sinister. It would be even better if was to drizzle lightly, the rain soaking the ground and her hair etc. (might also give her an excuse to justify potential tears, arguing it's just the raindrops ^^)

Whew, okay, sorry again about this text wall. And as I said, all these kinks are merely suggestions, and feel free to take or scrap whichever would work for you. Also, if you have any other questions or need more information, don't hesitate to ask. =)