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I can see both sides, on one hand I do like the final scene as it is and I think it stands pretty well as it is. But I can also see how it isn't "special" as it could be, especially if they are going to end up together more often then the first time should have something extra between them.

I do want to clarify though, while I can see why you might not be completely satisfied with it I still think it is fantastic and look forward to the next part.
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