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As per request. Since they were indecisive about the victim, in the end I just flipped a coin to decide. This one is a little different in that the focus was less on the guro, and more on the emotional aspects of the victim, I hope I did a decent job. Not a lot to say otherwise; I aged Lyra up a little from her canon (I think) age of ten, as can be inferred from the infodump at the start, she's around 14.

Hope you enjoyed, la-dee-da, feedback, criticism, feel free to make requests (I currently have one more request I'm working on).
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