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Very nice chapter again. :) The rival of Akane looks cool.... even if I prefer still Akane.

But I wonder...... a new idea to have Eris punishing Akane for following her byt playing with her womb with her strenght? After all, Akane love to have her womb in dificult situation isn't it? ^^

Other idea, have Akane womb suspended just above animals demon who jumpe for catching the womb of Akane or other things? May be with an inteligent demon?

By the way? with the succubus now reveal? what about Akane prisoner by this demon and the succubus finding new way to tourment Akane Womb, even by giving her the power of regeneration for continue this dirty game.

Other idea for the character who can separate all her body part, that can be a friend of Akane very Clumsy (so she lost very frequently a body part). So may be Akane can like stole some of her body part (the feet because it seem she prefer feet) for having fun? Then She is block in an other akward situation and some one play with her womb, discovering the feet? After, may be he think the wom is a bad creature and hit it, giving back the feet to the sientifist(And with Leanne or Akane must go take back the feet). or it's the demon and this one have to toy for play. ^^

This is all my idea for this chapter, be free to use and make us dream with your awesome story. ;)
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