Thanks, seeing that someone has already read it and taken the time to leave a comment made me really happy.
I had a lot of doubts about posting something that didn't even contain anything sexual.
If I had known someone would be able to see it for its good points, I would have liked to post under a pseudonym instead of anonymously.

This is the first time I've written a piece of fiction, unless I'm forgetting about something in grade school.
I want to keep trying.