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Rather than just necro, there's also a severe lack of this sort of "clean" snuff kills. Definitely looking forward to the next part. Thanks for the fun read!

The main issue with this sort of writing is variety. Even if the plot doesn't actually need to be real complicated like Summermount was it can still get pretty difficult after awhile to avoid being repetitive in properly describing different girls and killing them in different ways, especially as numbers rack up and most things within the confines of the set-up are already used. Was surprised by the wrist-mounted crossbow though, certainly never thought of that one.
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