You're a very good writer! You should keep going!

The only constructive criticism I can give is that you should try rereading your stories after letting them sit for a day (which you may already do for all I know). There are minor typos every once in a while, but that's nothing on the typo fests that live here. You're obviously very thorough. Clear sentences. Good gram/punc. Good flow and timing.

Keep up the great work.