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Hallelujah! Another story! This one was definitely different, even when compared to your normal stories. It seemed to deal less with the actual action and instead with how it affected Rainbow Dash mentally. Though, this also seemed to be its weak point in my opinion as it got a little dull midway through the story, most likely because once Rainbow's brain was removed, she essentially just became a spectator for the rest of the story, and even the action at the end of the story between Applejack, Applebloom, and Rainbow's body was VERY tame when set next to your usual standards.

None the less, I enjoyed the story immensely, especially seeing as there's been a bit of a dry spell with non-lethal guro lately. I didn't even mind the MLP basis for this story. Doubly so as I've been reading MLP fanfiction like crazy since sometime in February for reasons I can't be bothered to figure out.

Can't wait for your next story. =)
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