Cheers for the feedback everyone. Glad you enjoyed it Narra

It's definitely different, won't deny that, and the ending "climax" will probably seem tame compared to my usual stuff, which I think was probably because I was writing it for a non gurochan audience-probably thought while I wanted people into non-lethal gore to read it, maybe I'd tone down the prolapse/mad insertion stuff

The pacing I will offer a slight defence of: I think being helpless and reduced to a mere spectator is kinda hot on it's own, and I still like those scenes. At least that's my thinking going into it.

Mod Merch is I think 100% sfw and an example of me writing something that is on the surface not kinky, but actually very kinky if you're like me and think in a certain way. It's very very tame, but fun to write. And don't even bother with the wonderquads story; you'll be in for a rather nasty surprise I think. I've added a fair few fetishes to my already far too elaborate arsenal of kinks, but those will not be appearing on gurochan. I know my audience here!

JIP:If you're registered to FA you can PM me there.