all
/
g
/
s
/
fur
/
art
/
ai
/
3dcg
/
f
/
rp
/
req
/
p2p
/
dis
/
lit
/
kaki
chat
GUROchan!
This list is WIP...
1
2
3
So use the classic menu
Link 4
Link 5
Link 6
Link 7
List 3
Link 8
Link 9
[
Settings
]
[
Home
] [
Catalog
] [
Search
] [
Thread list
] [
Stats
] [
Reports
] [
Watcher
] [
PMs
] [
Admin
]
Literature
[
Return
]
Report a post
Preview
2017/06/06
(Tue)
22:35:49
No.
9997
[
Report
]
▶
Wow, great story! I quite enjoyed it. My only nitpick would probably be that I feel you could go a tiny bit more in depth regarding the drowning scene itself, but other than that I think it was perfect, both in terms of story content and actual writing. ^^
Post number
No.
9997
Board
Literature
Reason
Optional. Describe what's wrong with it.
Style: