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I think I can work with that. (I may take a few days to write, though; creativity isn't something with an on/off-switch after all.) Just two more small details: Should she die by a single, clean stab to the heart or neck (or even eye), or just ramming the knife into her chest and belly a whole lot until she bleeds to death?
Also to involve 'you' for the ending, what name should I use for you? (Otherwise I'll just go with 'anon' or 'n/a'.) And how would you react to finding the murdered body of your gf in your basement? Be sensible and call the police, or do something more interesting like using her body one last time, then calling the police or just disposing of it? (Or something else entirely)
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