Here's a rewrite/completion of one started in Killers and Victims.

Early Morning Killing Spree

Snuff, Pedo, Gore, Piss, Necro

Ralph Holland sat in his car holding a .500 S&W Magnum in his hand, constantly fidgeting with it and turning it over in his hand. This is how Ralph spent the last hour; playing with the gun, even pointing it at his own head a few times, and thinking about one thing: Kaori Harada, and her new lover.

Kaori had been Ralph’s friend since she was only seven, shortly after her family immigrated from Japan. Over the years, as Kaori grew from a little girl into a woman, Ralph began to have feelings for her, and on more than one occasion Ralph found himself jerking off to romantic or lustful fantasies about her. It wasn’t hard to fall in love with her; Kaori was overtly kind, funny, and easy going. On top of that, she was attractive, with an average height and fit body, shoulder-length hair that was usually dyed red, and sizable breasts that she always seemed to show off with loose-fitting tops. Considering his feelings and their long-lasting friendship, Ralph was certain that they were destined to be together, whenever he got up the courage to ask her out.

His plans to make Kaori came crashing down the day before, however. She called Ralph and three other friends to lunch with her and her roommate, Nora Hampton, saying she had something big to tell them. She told everyone that she was a lesbian, and that she fell in love with a woman by the name of Karla Caldwell. Ralph and everyone else congratulated Kaori and assured her that she had their approval, and Ralph wasn’t even upset at first. However, after he got home and thought about the fact that it destroyed any chance he might have with being her boyfriend, and seething hatred welled up to consume his every thought.
He spent most of the night, unable to sleep, dreaming up ways to end Kaori’s relationship with Karla. Eventually the elaborate plans to get them to break up became plans to commit murder. At around four o'clock Ralph, deciding to act on his anger, climbed out of bed, put on a t-shirt and blue jeans, stole a gun from his dad’s gun cabinet, and drove off.

He parked out in front of Kaori’s apartment, since he’d need to get Karla's address from her first. At around five fifteen, Ralph got out of the car. He placed the gun in his right pants pocket, although he wasn’t expecting things to get too complicated at this point, and told himself that he just didn’t want anyone stealing it out of his car. He walked across the sidewalk and upstairs to her apartment. He rang the doorbell several times, and a minute later someone answered the door.

“Oh, good morning Ralph. What brings you here so early?”

Nora Hampton, a short, average, woman with wavy waist-length blonde hair, stood beaming at Ralph from the doorway. She had on a white t-shirt that wrapped tightly around her natural E-cup breasts and knee-length blue jeans shorts, and from the looks of it she just now put both of those on.

“Is Kaori awake?”

“Oh, uh, yeah. I think she’s getting ready,” Nora replied, not at all hiding the disappointment in her voice; Ralph knew that she liked him, but he was too focused on Kaori to consider her an option. However, he ignored her tone and moved on to why he was here.

“Call her in here, and tell her Ralph would like to talk,” and, realizing his tone was too harsh and demanding, he added “please?”

“Sure. Why don’t you come in and take a seat while I go get her?”

Ralph entered the apartment and sat on the edge of their red couch as Nora closed the front door and went into the other room.

While Nora grabbed Kaori, Ralph sat there adjusting his position frequently, and trying to think of what he was going to say when they came back. Lost in his thoughts, Ralph failed to notice the gun slipping further out of his pocket each time he moved.

“I don’t think you’ve ever visited me this early,” Kaori said sleepily.

Kaori entered the living room with Nora, wearing a pink see-through shirt that gave him a good view of the black bra underneath, and black pants. Her red hair was clearly just brushed, and a little damp; that, coupled with the smell of strawberries emanating from her body, suggested that she just emerged from the shower.

“So, what do you want to talk to me about?” She inquired.

“Well, I-um, I-I…”, Ralph closed his eyes and mentally banished any fear that was keeping him from asking his question, “ I wanted to know about Karla,” he said hastily, and once again sounded demanding.

“Karla?” Kaori asked, with surprise and even a twinge of hurt from Ralph’s tone.

Sensing that things were going to get heated, Nora immediately decided that she better not watch this. “I gotta be at work in an hour, so I better go shower and get ready,” she said before rushing off into the bathroom. Neither Ralph or Kaori paid her any attention.

“How did you meet her, anyways?”

“Karla?” Kaori asked again, which annoyed Ralph; although, he tried to hide it.

“Yeah, her. When and how did you meet her?”

“Well, Nora babysits her little sister sometimes, and occasionally I go over to bring them lunch. I met Karla during a few visits, and we quickly bonded.”

“And you never introduced or even mentioned her to the group?” Ralph raised his voice, and this time there was no regret or attempt to amend his tone.

“You’re not upset are you? I mean, you seemed perfectly fine yesterday.”

“I really didn’t think about it until I got home,” he said firmly, no longer even attempting to mask his emotions.

Tears filled Kaori’s eyes, although she tried to hold them back as she spoke, “I didn’t think you’d judge me for, well… for being who I am… you always supported me.”

“I have nothing against homosexuality or anything, but I always imagined, well…”

“Well… you always imagined what, exactly?” Kaori cut in as Ralph started stammering.

“I-I always imagined us together. You know? Since I was your first friend, after all.” After that, Ralph found himself unable to even look at Kaori.

She also didn’t know how to respond, and twirled a strand of hair in her index finger, before saying “I-I will admit that I once thought we’d end up together, when you never asked me out I gave up waiting for you. Then I started realizing that I found other girls attractive more than guys. I figured you wouldn’t be jealous, and just be happy that I’m happy.”

“I’m sorry I was too much of a coward to ask you out, but I’d like a chance. Can ya give me that much? Please?” Ralph begged.

“I’m sorry Ralph, but it’s just too late. I already have someone.”

“Then dump her.”

“I can’t do that to her just like that. No! I’m the first person she ever fell in love with! It would crush her if I just abandoned her like that. I just couldn’t hurt her like that.”

“But you can hurt your best friend instead?”

“I didn’t mean to hurt you, though. I’m sorry,” she replied.

Ralph stormed up from the couch, about to yell at her, when the sound of something clattering to the floor froze both of them in place. Ralph looked down and saw that the gun had fallen out of his pocket. Kaori looked at it in terror, and at first she didn’t know what to say, not until Ralph reached down to pick it up.

“Why did you bring that? Are you planning to hurt me?” She asked.

“Just give me the address to Karla’s place and I’ll leave,” he demanded.

Kaori, without even thinking about it, shook her head. “No! E-even if you kill me, I will not let you murder an innocent woman just for dating me.” She looked at Ralph defiantly, and masking the fear of knowing he could kill her at any moment. When he didn’t, she reached into her pocket and pulled out her phone. In the verge of crying, Kaori told Ralph, “I hate that you destroyed our friendship because someone made me happy. I also hate what I’m about to do, but I have to call the cops.”

Ralph, overwhelmed with anger and fear, and unable to think clearly, decided to shoot the phone out of Kaori’s hands. He pulled the trigger, and the thunderous crack rang out through the apartment. When Ralph realized what he had just done, he was aghast.

“Ka-Kaori?” He muttered nervously.

Kaori collapsed to the floor milliseconds after Ralph pulled the trigger. She laid there on her back writhing as blood poured from the front in back of her neck, from a hole going through it a few centimeters from the center. Kaori’s face, contorted with pain and soaked with tears, looked up at him; her mouth opened, but no words came out, just a wet raspy sound followed by a foam of blood and saliva.

“Kaori I-I am so sor…”

Nora rushed into the living room with a towel wrapped around her torso. Ralph, still confused by the flood of emotions, swiveled the gun towards Nora and fired three times. Each bullet slammed into her abdomen, and her body jerked back with each strike. The towel flew from her body as she stumbled backwards and crashed down onto her table, spread eagle with her bushy womanhood on full display. Her hands went to the holes in her belly, which bled excessively.

“Why did I do that?” Ralph screamed and dropped the gun.

As if just realizing that she had been shot, Nora drowned out Ralph’s outcry of guilt with screams of agony. “Help me! Please!” She yelled repeatedly, before the pain became too much and she couldn’t speak coherently anymore.

Ralph picked up the gun and walked over to Nora. She looked up at him with hate-filled eyes as he approached.

“I’m so sorry, Nora. Forgive me, but I’m going to ease your suffering. Forgive me…” He placed the barrel against her temple.

“Please,” Nora murmured; whether begging him to spare her or to end her suffering, he wasn’t certain.

He pulled the trigger; Nora’s head jerked back under the force and her blonde hair blew back as her brain matter splattered on the floor. Piss shot out of her urethra and formed a long, narrow, damp spot on the carpet.

“Kaori…” Ralph muttered and walked over to her.
Her body twitched sporadically, a huge red spot coated the carpet around her, and the crotch of her jeans was soaked with piss. Her mouth still opened and closed, fleetingly trying to take in air, but the raspy sounds were no longer audible.
Ralph was about to shoot her in the head to end her suffering, but a lustful urge overtook him. He held her in his arms and kissed her deeply, and he became so lost in the act that he didn’t even register the taste of blood as his tongue explored the inside of her mouth. He felt her body spasm in his grip, and when he finally pulled away, her eyes were vacant and her body limp.

For a few seconds a familiar sensation spread across his body, centered around his groin, and he felt the urge to undress Kaori and have sex with her corpse. He quickly shook the idea from his head, telling himself that he wasn’t a sicko. He turned away before the idea could return.

When he turned away, the first thought that went through Ralph’s head was that it would be fitting to press the gun up to his own temple and pull the trigger one last time. In fact, he did raise the gun for a brief second, and then realized that he didn’t have the nerve to go through with it.

Instead, he would take out his grief on the bitch who stole Kaori’s love from him in the first place. Although he was worried that he might have difficulty finding her, he eventually found her address in Nora’s phone after fifteen minutes of searching.

Karla didn’t live far, and the drive to her house only took six minutes. The place was a two-story suburban house, and he guessed that Karla still lived with her parents; or she was an older woman, but Ralph thought it was unlikely.

He pulled up to the driveway and walked up to the door.

“Hello? If it’s Kaori, you will have to wait, because Karla’s in the shower with Alice,” a woman’s voice yelled when he rang the doorbell.

Ralph ignored the woman and continued, not bothering to say a word.

“Hold the fuck on!” She yelled, and Ralph soon heard footsteps approaching the front door.

A petite woman with chin-length messy black hair answered the door in a pink nightgown; from the strands of hair sticking out underneath, it was safe to say that she wasn’t wearing panties. The woman appeared to be in her late twenties, although Ralph figured that mid-thirties was more likely.

“Do you know Karla Caldwell?” Ralph asked, even though he knew the answer.

“Yeah, I am here mother. Now, what is it you want?”

“I came to see her,” he replied.

“Karla doesn’t date guys, and she’s with someone,” she snapped, “and you don’t look like any of her friends, so go away.”

Before she could shut the door, Ralph pulled the gun from his pocket and waved it in her face. “I will see your daughter, whether you want me to or not, you fucking bitch.”

Astonished, the woman stepped several feet back with her eyes wide open. She stepped back further into the living room as Ralph advanced over the threshold. He shut the door and locked it before fully turning his attention to the lady, who only looked on in fear as he walked towards her.
“I wish I could let you live, but you would likely call the cops before I could pay your daughter back for ruining my life.”

Ralph aimed the gun directly at her face and pulled the trigger, splattering blood and brain tissue behind her and sending her flying back where she crashed to the floor with her legs spread out.

Ralph ascended the stairs to the upper floor, and the sound of running water brought him to the third door from the landing. He pulled a few more bullets out of his pocket and loaded them into the gun, then he grabbed the doorknob.

Unsurprisingly, since they thought that their mother was the only other person in the house, the door wasn’t locked. Ralph pushed the door opened quietly and entered the bathroom. Two figures could be seen through the shower curtains at the end of the long narrow bathroom, and it seemed they failed to notice Ralph’s intrusion. As he moved closer, the lights over the sink cast a shadow over the curtain, and the head of a young girl peaked around the curtain for the briefest moment before disappearing.

“There’s a man out there!” A terror-filled voice whispered suddenly.

“Don’t play jokes, I know it’s just mom,” another voice said.

He heard movement, but before the other girl could take a look, Ralph grabbed the curtain and yanked it hard enough that the curtain rod clattered to the floor. Two terrified naked girls stared at Ralph, knowing that something bad was about to happen to them.

The girl standing on right, possibly nineteen-years-old, had shoulder-length brown hair, and bright blue eyes. She was also petite; were it not for her fully-developed breasts and puffy nipples, even if they were small, and the trimmed bush around her lady bits, she could pass for much younger.

The other girl was clearly much younger; probably nine or ten, sporting long jet-black hair. Her preadolescent chest was flat and undeveloped, and her lady parts were hairless and untouched.

“I assume that you are Karla Caldwell,” Ralph said as he waved the gun in the brown-haired girl's face.

“Y-yes. What do you want with me? Please don’t hurt me,” she drew back against the wall as she answered, trying fruitlessly to get away from his gun.

“Kaori was supposed to be my girlfriend, but you stole her,” Ralph snarled.

“I didn’t even-”

“I don’t care about your fucking excuses. I want you to turn around and thrust your ass out towards me. You can get some dick before I kill you, which is more than Kaori got.”
“Wait! Kaori’s d-dead?”

“Yeah. If you hadn’t taken her she’d still be alive.”

“Kaori’s dead… Oh my God...” she repeated before putting her hands over her face.

“Quit bawling and present your cunt to me, or I’ll make sure that it can never be used.”

Karla mere shook her head and uttered something.

“What?” Ralph ordered.

Karla wiped her eyes, looked at Ralph defiantly, and said “I said 'no,' because I’m not into cocks. Just leave me alone.”

“I will shoot you if I you don’t obey me,” he warned her.

“I don’t care! Shoot me, because I can be reunited with Kaori,” and she closed her eyes, bracing for a bullet to the head.

However, instead of blowing her brains out, he lowered the gun before pulling the trigger. BANG! Karla screamed out as blood gushed from a hole that used to be her mons, and she slid down into the tub with her hands cupped over her ruined womanhood.

The little girl jumped out of the tub, screaming, as Karla’s blood streamed towards her.

“If you had cooperated, I was just going to blow your brains out afterwards and leave. But I think I’ll let you watch your sister die first.”

“Alice… run!” Karla grunted.

Alice did try to run, but Ralph grabbed her by the arm. Alice screamed and tried to pull away, but she didn’t have the strength, and he effortlessly put her on the counter with her ass in the sink.

“Let me go you creepy mot-mmhmmhmm”

Her words were cut off as Ralph shoved the barrel into her mouth. Tears drenched her face, and before Ralph even pulled the trigger Alice started pissing in the sink. Ralph waited a second for her to feel her own urine around her ass, and then he pulled the trigger. The mirror over the sink was instantly covered in red as the bullet blew the back of her head off. Alice’s body spasmed for another minute while piss continued to spray from her body.

Karla wailed louder than before, and called out her sister’s name hysterically over and over.

“It’s time to finish this,” Ralph told her as he replaced the used bullets and looked at her. “But don’t think you will be getting an instant death.”

Ralph pointed the gun at the girl’s left knee and blew out her kneecap. He then repeated the process with the right kneecap. The pain was overwhelming, and she collapsed onto her side. Then Ralph placed the barrel against each one of her nipples and pulled the trigger, before putting the last bullet into her throat.

Ralph looked over at Karla as she writhed in a tub of her own blood, yet somehow he felt she deserved to suffer more. So he turned off the cold water and turned the hot up to full blast. Then he plugged the drain before switching to the faucet; as Karla was directly underneath it, her face got the blast of scalding hot water. The pitch of her muffled screams intensified as the tub started to fill with hot water and blood. She died in less than thirty seconds, but those thirty seconds were filled with the worst agony of her life.

As he turned to leave, the sight of Alice’s untouched prepubescent pussy brought the same lust he felt in Kaori’s apartment. Perhaps because this little girl didn’t mean anything to him, or he heard police sirens in the distance and knew that this was his last chance to get laid, he wasn’t able to ignore the urge this time. Although he never thought he’d be turned on by a dead preteen, Ralph was going to give up his virginity to one.

He moved Alice’s body onto the floor for a less awkward position, and caused pieces of brain to cascade out of the back of her head. Ralph was amazed at how fragile the girl’s limp body felt in his arms, and the vacant eyes along with the crimson in her gaping mouth amplified her helpless appearance. When he laid her on the floor, her smooth undeveloped pussy seemed even more inviting.

Ralph unzipped his pants and pulled out his erect cock. He positioned himself over Alice’s body and guided his member to her girlhood; warm blood trickled around it as he tore through her hymen and penetrated her tight hole. Once in, he embraced her in his arms and pulled her up to his chest as he thrust all the way in.

Ralph grunted with discomfort as his cock tore through Alice’s tight girlhood, but he ignored the pain and continued until he hit he cervix. Ecstasy soon overpowered the pain as he continued to ram his dick into her pussy; his frequency increased every few seconds. He was so aroused that he didn’t last long, and after four minutes his ecstasy climaxed. He pumped his seed into Alice’s dead womb until he felt it spilling out around his cock.

After he squeezed out the last drop, he collapsed with Alice still in his arms. Instead of leaving, he just continued slowly fucking the girl as he tried to catch his breath.

It was too late, anyways. He heard cop cars outside and someone banging on the front door. Rather than run, he picked up the .500 S&W and fired a bullet through Alice’s head to get their attention. Just as he reloaded the gun he heard break down the door. With the gun aimed at the bathroom door, he continued fucking Alice as footsteps drew closer and closer.