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2017/08/31
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An interesting original idea.
But for the criticism, I would say that you should not explain everything in the beginning, but incorporate introduction and explanation why she is so stretchy and limitations into the story itself.
So far the story is not getting too extreme so I guess there is some room left for next chapter.
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