To those of you who left positive or constructive comments, THANK YOU!! They are greatly appreciated and will be taken into account moving forward (yes, I am trying to motivate to write more)

To those of you who can read a story that ran a full 6 pages, with world building, relationships and emotions, and come away with 'boo! diapers, boo!!' kindly bug right off *big friendly smile*. I find them a little bit cute, only for certain types of death, quite aside from the practical use. They are not part of every section I plan to write, but I WILL include them as I please.

To the friend who pointed out the second spit, whoops! one of those was meant to be a noose.

To the friend who had the mosh pit idea....I am not really a fan of guts or significant gore....but the birthday premise and a fairly similar tone to what you suggested is actually one of the things i have half written :)

I hope to have the next bit written and up by the end of the week. love you all! *blows little kisses* <3