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Cardcaptor Sakura ideas



I have an idea about Sakura and some homeless guys, though it doesn't involve guro and is basically "Sakura's ultimate love (compassion) for everyone makes her look and homeless people and see how nobody loves them whyle they deserve to be loved not less than any other people, so to fix that unfairness she goes and has sex with them". Actually, there are two options here: either it all begins with Sakura walking along some homeless' camp and she sees those ill-fated people and starts to sympathize with them and ends up having sex with them to make their lives not so worthless. Another option is Tomoyo notices Sakura taking some food and going to some place Tomoyo has no idea about, so Tomoyo secretly follows. There she sees that Sakura brought the food for homeless and after that willingly had sex with them. Tomoyo surely filmed that. And after that Tomoyo asks Sakura what was going on and Sakura explains how some time ago she was attacked and raped by a bunch of homeless guys. She was scared at first, but then saw into their desolate hearts, saw that those people just want to be happy as everyone else would, but the fate was so cruel to them that they became desperate enough to go and rape a little girl. From that point Sakura devoted herself to helping those people as much as she could, which included free food and sex. Then, if Tomoyo and Sakura have that conversation right on the spot and not on the next day at school, Tomoyo, touched by Sakura's kindness, asks to join in, and some more sex follows, now with Tomoyo included.
If I wanted to add guro to this story, the obvious thing is of course for Sakura to feed herself to the homeless. But to think of it, even in a world where that was totally okay, if Sakura really wanted to help them, she would bring a little food from home and have sex with them everyday rather that make a one-time feast for them.
Another idea, which does involve guro, is some random man kidnapping Sakura and raping her, Sakura asks why he's doing it and he tells how while life wasn't fair to him from the start, this one day was even worse, he was fired, his girlfriend/wife left him, maybe something else like this happened, so he just said to himself "screw it all, I'll just go and rape a random little girl to have at least some joy in my life". Again, it makes Sakura all compassionate, so she doesn't resist him anymore and even provides any help he might need. She knows he's going to kill her in the end, and maybe torture her hard before it, but she doesn't try to escape even when sees a chance, she wants to help this person in any way she is able, and if the only way is to let him take it out on her, she is willing to do it just to make him feel better. She helps him set up torturing devices, she gives him advices how to dispose of her body and not be caught up by police. Maybe there's a moment where she gets acces to a telephone without the kidnapper knowing, she uses the telephone, but she doesn't call the police, she calls her dad and tells him she's staying at Tomoyo's for a couple of days, so he doesn't have to worry. Ah, and it seems it has to be someone else's phone, not the kidnapper's one, so they can't trace him after they finally start searching for the missing girl. And in the end he kills her, disposes of the corpse and feels refreshed and willing to live again.

> If it is consensual it is not rape LOL

Yeah, what I meant its rape until the man tells his story to Sakura, then she becomes his willing fuck toy. Either he tells it right as he rapes her or right after it. Then he ends up standing on his knees crying at what a worthless person he is or something. And Sakura comes to his comfort, tells him everything will surely be okay, hugs and pats his head, but when it doesn't help much, she lowers and starts sucking his dick still covered in blood from taking her virginity.

> I think you could solve that if Sakura only talks with that guy over internet and sets situation in a way he kidnaps and tortures her without knowing that she is one who staged all that, so he still thinks he is raping her against her will.

So effectively she talks the guy into kidnapping and raping a random girl? Even if she somehow makes sure it will be her, that's not the point. It just makes no sense to talk the guy into doing horrible things, rather than then, Sakura would try to talk him into loving his life no matter what and that everything will surely be okay and things like that.
A scene also came to my mind where Sakura asks the guy his name and he's like "I tell you and then you tell the police? Ah, whatever, I just don't care what happens anymore" and tells his name. And Sakura tells him "that won't do, you should care". Which means he didn't plan to kill her at first, but she told him into caring about what happens to him, and if he cares he can't let her live, so effectively she talks him into killing her.
Ah, now you might ask what's the difference if Sakura ends up talking him to do horrible things to her anyway. In your suggestion the guy isn't a rapist yet, so Sakura wouldn't talk him into becoming one. In what I'm talking about he's already a rapist and it can't be helped, but he's not yet caught by the police and now this one can be helped. ALso, Sakura isn't directly talking him into killing her and becoming a murdurer, she only talks him into caring about his own future, and if it means he must kill her, so be it.
Also, when thinking how he would kill her eventually, Sakura's worried about when that might happen, but not because she fears it, but because she's worried how long she will be able to help this guy.
And when thinking of her family and friends and how they'll be sad when she dies, she ends up thinking "they will be sad, yes, but they will manage. This guy won't".

> Homeles guys as rapists, is not very good idea, because usually homeless guys are quite nice and very unlikely to hurt or hate someone. But this is common in manga for some reson

Well, if you say so. I actually came up with rape idea as a solution to how Sakura's sexual relationship with them might have started. Cause it's easier to write about how Sakura comes to them and has sex as always, than to write about the first time and how it came to it.

THE SWEET SAKURA



Sakura uses The Sweet card to turn herself into chocolate to give to her beloved Yukito-san for Valentine Day. She most probably stays aware, cause it would be an uninteresting story otherwise. But probably she should be immobile in her chocolate form. That would also help her not being found out by Yukito, since he's not aware of magic and believes it's just a 1:1 chocolate figure of Sakura. Now, how can she give herself to Yukito while being immobile and trying to hide it's real her? I'm not sure if she should just leave herself somewhere Yukito would surely find and have a letter on her that says it's a present from Sakura, or the other option is Sakura uses The Mirror card to pose as herself and give her real chocolate self to Yukito.
Then my intention is to say that Sakura didn't expect that Yukito with his enermous appetite would want to eat all of her in one go and thus she doesn't have a way to survive, so she's surprised at first, but then accepts it, being a sweet girl she is (pun intended). But that bring the question of how she was planning to survive in case he doeasn't eat all of her? Even if she could turn back into a person amy moment, and wait for while Yukito's not looking, he would wonder where the chocolate gone and would be sad cause it was Sakura's present. So I can't figure out what was Sakura's initial plan. Maybe she just didn't really think that far? But that kinda kills the poin)t where she realises she's not going to survive because of Yukito's appetite, because as soon as she thinks about it she'll realise she wasn't going to survive it anyway.
The other option just came to my mind. Let's say Sakura does reveal magic to Yukito and starts with turning her body parts into chocolate and feeding them to Yukito. He keeps asking for more though, so unexpectedly Sakura finds herself wholly eaten. But I vaguely remember from anime it would like make him pass out and forget seeing magic? Or is it my imagination?

> Eating immobile chocolate statue is nothing special, it is just statue even if it was human some time ago.

Well, she's still aware, but you're right, that would probably still be boring.

> so second option is better, but also since it is fantasy, why bother with turning body parts to chocolate if it can be all chocolate and stay alive and mobile?

It's easier to imagine chocolate being immobile. Besides, if she starts with, say, some chocolare fingers, then Yukito keeps asking for more and she keeps turning more parts of herself into chocolate and before she knows it there's not much left, so she can as well go all the way... so, if it goes like this, it's more clear that it wasn't Sakura's initial intention to be wholly eaten.

> But you really need enormous appetite to eat whole Sakura in one go.

I think it agrees well with his appetite from the anime, well, maybe just a bit more exagarrated. He needs a lot of energy for sustaining Yue and chocolate is just perfect for it, no surprise that upon having enermous appetite he especially loves chocolate.

> so i think instead of Sakura using magic on herself she could just return from one of her fights turned into chocolate and Tomoyo finds our that she is very tasty.

So, Sakura lost the battle against The Sweet and was turned into chocolate, then she's eaten by Tomoyo? But Tomoyo doesn't have as enermous appetite Yukito has, and also this scenario is less consensual (even if Sakura lets Tomoyo eat her, it's not the same as when it's Sakura's initiative to be eaten even if she wasn't expecting to be wholly eaten, but she didn't oppose it either).

> as you often say this is guro story, so we can imagine it any way.

Okay, maybe so.

> No she did not lost battle, it just happens that she was turned into chocolate(something like princess Bubblegum who is made out of chewing gum) and did not noticed that ,maybe she just absorbed The Sweet's powers. She is not eaten by Tomoyo alone either. Tomoyo just finds out about her strange condition and they discuss what to do next. It can be no less consensual because she can offer herself when she notices how good she tastes. At first they just sample her to see what happened and later she eventually gets eaten completely.

Hmm... let's see... I guess she can start with offering small bits of herself to everyone of her friends, then when it's Yukito's turn such a little bit is not enough for him, so he ends up eating all of her. That might work, thought I'm still not sure about all "it just happens" thing.
What if... let's say after all of the events Sakura revealed her magic to all of her friends. Let's say they're all having a dinner at school together, not in the class, but somewhere outside neat the fence that separates them from the hight scool so that Yukito could join later. And Kero-chan, whose existance is also revealed, watching as others eat, says: "hey, is there anything for me? Are there any sweets?" And Sakura is like "Ah, it can't be helped" and uses The Sweet card to turn her fingers into sweets and feed them to Kero-chan. Others upon seeing it want to try too, so Sakura turns more parts of herself into sweets to please everyone. Finally Yukito sees them through the fence and gets over it to join in. He ends up eating the rest of Sakura.
So what about this version?

> It seems that your main idea is to make Sakura sacrifice herself on purpose instead of random accident.

The idea is Sakura starts with little bits, but people ask for more, especilally Yukito, so before she knows it she ends up wholly eaten.
> But still just turning body parts into real chocolate is not that appealing because that will be just eating chocolate made from her body not Sakura

> I still think it would be better to limit transformation to the taste only while visually there should be no changes

Like in that manga? I guess that can work.

BALLOONS



Well, basicaly the idea is to tie a number of helium-filled baloons to someone's neck until they suffocate. Then I started thinking what a setting for such a story might be. And I can imagine Sakura and Tomoyo on a festival of some sort and they either buy balloons or win them in some sort of competitions and challenges, and tie them on Sakura's neck maybe because her hands are occupied by something else like perhaps cotton candy... I guess Tomoyo is the one who joyfully goes from booth to booth taking part in whatever wins her those balloons (maybe one is a shooting range... not sure what else might be there), and she drags Sakura along and uses her neck to store the balloons. Though Tomoyo probably wouldn't be so negligent to Sakura's condition, would she? So I think, maybe I should swap their roles around? So that Tomoyo's so happy to be together with Sakura she doesn't care if the balloons Sakura puts on her would kill her. But I prefer imagining Sakura suffocating rather than Tomoyo. So another option is that it's Syaoran and Sakura, and again Sakura is so happy to be together with him, she doesn't care the balloons he keeps putting on her neck would kill her.

>you need awful lot of balloons to suffocate someone so it is hardly possible to do as accident.

In reality, probably. But for a guro story I believe it's okay to change the laws of physics just a little bit so that a person like Yukito can eat all of Sakura's body volume of chocolate and less balloons are needed to suffocate a little girl.

> But what I was saying that you must find a reason to put those balloons on her neck.

Tomoyo (or Syaoran) can't hold them because s/he's busy playing whatever that wins those balloons for her/him. So s/he decides to give them to Sakura. And since Sakura's hands are occupied with, say, cotton candy, they tie them to Sakura's neck instead. Also, if it's Tomoyo, she may find that balloons look cute on Sakura's neck.
And another option just came to my mind. Maybe it's Sakura and Meiling. And Meiling wants to compete with Sakura at the firing range. Sakura doesn't really care for competing, but decides why not. Also Tomoyo encourages her to take it seriously and aim for the win. After the first round they both score enough to win a balloon each. Meiling isn't satisfied and declares the competitions continues and now it's who can win more balloons. Encouraged by Tomoyo, Sakura agrees. Sinse they both need their hands to shoot, they decide to put their balloons on their necks. It also makes the competition more challenging as the more balloons you have on your neck the less you can breathe and harder it is to aim. And eventually, to Tomoyo's joy, Sakura is the first to win enough balloons to suffocate to death.
Does this sound better?

> I wonder how that suffocation will happen: will she just stop moving eventually and tomoyo will notice that she is dead? OR they will walk away from shooting range and Tomoyo will notice that she is dragging dead body or maybe Sakura will fly away and die in the sky?

I was thinking Sakura dies at the firing range and Tomoyo declares her victory, that could be easily put in the plot, but now that you mentioned it, I like the option where they are casually walking away without bothering to take the balloons from Sakura's neck. Maybe the time is up, so whoever has more balloons wins, competition is over so Sakura and Tomoyo casually walk away? Or maybe the competition was over who gets to accompany Syaoran on this festival, so Sakura wins and leaves with Syaoran and so happy to be with him she doesn't think about the balloons and ends up suffocating while holding his hand and happily smiling?

>yes, this is good, also because balloons take away most of the weight she can walk even while suffocating without falling down.
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