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CLONE DOLL



It's kinda cheap version of the Live of a Doll series, here reduced to one story. The premice is mostly the same: NERV sells Rei's clones as dolls, you can do whatever you want to them: fuck, snuff, throw away... or maybe you want to dress them up in different costumes or you want them to do all the housework for you? They can do it too.
Anyway, the difference starts with the fact that Rei doesn't go and change with one of the dolls. She's rather indifferent to the whole thing. Shinji, on the other hand, is not. He orders a doll and soon hears a doorbell. He opens the door and sees Rei. Now, the point is, it's real Rei, who came to ask Shinji to help her with homework or something casual like this, but Shinji believes it's the doll he ordered. So he fucks her and tortures her and snuffs her. Rei is confused, but complies. Then, when Rei's all ruined and dying, but still conscious, the doorbell rings again. Shinji opens the door and sees another Rei there with some clear indication she's a doll. Maybe she's accompanied by a delivery boy or maybe just has a pricetag on her. Or maybe she's naked and Shinji realises that's how the dolls are sold and when he opened the door to previous Rei she was wearing her usual school uniform and Shinji, used to see Rei wearing it, just didn't pay attention to it that time. Anyway he realises the doll is before him awaiting orders and the one dying behimd his back is the real Rei. In confusion he looks at one Rei than at the other until he fully gets the situation. Rei also finally gets why he was doing all those things to her, he just mistook her for the doll. As Shinji and Rei look at each other and realise the silly mistake, they both burst in laughter, though Rei ends up choking on her own blood. The doll stays still and watches silently and indifferently, finally she reminds Shinji she's here and still waiting for orders. And he says: "Ah, right, I wonder what should I do with you now? Well, that can be decided later, first let's clean all that mess" and he points to Rei's ruined body.

RECORD



The story starts with Rei with a noose on her neck standng before all her classmates and a teacher. She is hanged and struggles for long, while her classmates cheer her up, admire how long she lasts and encourage to last even longer. Basically all of the story is the hangign scene. Then in the end, when after long long sruggle Rei finally goes limp, the teacher stops the timer he was holding in his hand and declares: "That's a new prefecture record! Anyone wants to try and beat it?" And Asuka comes forward and says: "I do!"

WEEKEND



Remember the Shalter from the Rain idea? One where Shinji and Rei are hiding from the rain in a snuff cafe and leisurely study the menu like "Should we go for drowning? Nah, I don't have a swimsuit". That's where Sunny Day came from later.
So, returning to the idea of a couple discussing various methods of death, it came to my mind that mixing up some more casual entertainment would help showing those snuff things as no less casual. So, maybe rather than a special cafe, the characters (not sure if I should still go with Shinji and Rei for this version or change them to Sakura and Tomoyo or Len and Rin or someone else) discuss what to do at a weekend. And now the dialog would be like: "Maybe go to the cinema? No, they don't make good movies nowadays. Maybe hang ourselves then? That sounds better, but kinda too common. All right then, how about going to the zoo? Why, what's interesting is there in the zoo? Well, we can ask them to feed ourselves to the animals. And if they tell us they are already fed? Maybe just go to karaoke box?" and so on. Not sure how to end it though.

TELEPATHIC TWINS



As the name suggests, Kagamine Len and Rin have a strong telepathic link between them. Also, some circumstances separate them, maybe one of them is invited to a prestigious school abroad and it's too good of an offer to decline. Actually they don't have to worry that they would be separated, as they can always communicate telepathicaly. So they live their everyday lives, occasionaly communicating via their telepathic link. On one day Len is bored, so he establishes a telepathic link again and tells his sister that he is bored and asks her if she can entertain him somehow. Rin says sure and hangs herself for his fun. Len can see or rather feel her agony via the link and masturbates to it. Len cums the same moment Rin's body goes limp and he also loses consciousness. When he wakes up, he finds himself in Rin's body that was saved from the noose at the last moment and they tell him (still believing he's Rin) they just recieved news that far away Len just died of a heart attack with his penis in his hand. Perhaps Len also finds out he can now access Rin's memories (maybe the person who saved him was only known to Rin, and he realises he recognizes them). He thinks about all that situation and concludes: "Now that's really fun".

Recursion


Rei wakes up and discovers she's a new clone while the previous one is still alive. The previous Rei says that it must have been a mistake, so to correct it, she (the older Rei) should die, and she asks newer Rei to assist her. The newer Rei kills the older one, discovering that the older Rei seemed like she enjoyed dying. Rei gets interested and wakes up another clone, she explains to her that there must have been a mistake...
(Well, that's more of a loop that a recursion, but recursion sounds cooler and somewhat even creepier)

Elfen Lied


It goes by the title of the anime, because I haven't thought of a title for the sotry itself yet. And I haven't come with any kind of a title because the idea is still pretty vague. Also, beware of spoilers.
So, since I first saw Elfen Lied, I was fantasising about the scene in the train. Lucy kills Kouta's little sister, her blood sprays on him, and his reaction in my fantasy is "Have you done it? Wow! That was amazing!" and it makes him want to hug Lucy cause she's so adorable. Lucy is startled by such a reaction but then understands that he is the one who would accept her no matter what, so she returns the hug. Then they go back, Lucy kills Yuka and watching it makes Kouta fall even deeper in love with Lucy. While they are both covered in Yuka's blood, they kiss.
I was uncertain of how to continue it, but now that I wrote it down, it looks like it's actually a good ending right here. Maybe add something about them deciding to always be together from now on and Kouta also says if Lucy feels like another girl is threatening their relationship, she's free, no, she's even encoraged to kill her. Now I only have to come up with a title.

Taking notes


Shinji tells Rei he has to skip school and asks her to take notes for him. When the lessons start, Rei realises she doesn't have a pen, since she never took notes for herself. Or maybe it's just out of refill. Being, as Ritsuko put it, clumsy at living, Rei doesn't know what to do in this situation, she doesn't know she should just ask her classmates or teacher for a pen. She tries to solve the problem by herself and finds a solution that she believes is the best: she cuts her left wrist and writes with her blood. She dutfully takes the notes for Shinji until the lessons end and Rei looses counsciousness because of blood loss. That's where Shinji comes. It appears he skipped school to go buy a ring to make a proposal to Rei. He sees Rei unconscious and asks what happened. Asuka explains. Shinji finds it adorable how Rei did it for him. Asuka tells they can still save Rei if they bring her to infirmary right now. But Shinji tells Asuka to leave Rei be. Rei is sleeping so peacefully, Shinji doesn't want to bother her. Or maybe he realises that if she never wakes up, she can't anwer no to his proposal. So he puts the ring on unconscious Rei's finger and holds her hand as it becomes cold.

Princess's Dream


On Tsubasa Chronicles. Princess Sakura tells Syaoran about her secret dream. Once, when she was little and her father - the previous king - was still alive, Sakura was wandering over the palace and stumbled upon a torture chamber where she witnessed some criminal being brutally tortured. Sakura was fascinated by the scene, witnessing such pain that she could never think of before, and she couldn't help but wonder what it would be like to experience that unimaginable unbearable pain that would make her beg for death like that criminal. Her father found her staring in awe at the continuing torture (or maybe at the end of it where the criminal dies of torture), Sakura asked him if she can do it too and the king tells her that when she grows up she can. Sakura tells Syaoran that now she understands that her father misunderstood her and meant she can torture people when she grows up, but that doesn't change the fact that back then Sakura started living in anticipation of the moment when she herself can be tortured to death and it is still her dearest dream. Syaoran asks if this is indeed what Sakura wishes the most in her life, and as she confirms it, Syaoran tells her the is a way, but they will need Yukito's help (who's the royal magician if I remember correctly). So they go to Yukito and ask him for help, maybe Sakura lets him fuck her (right before Syaoran's eyes) to convince him to help. He gives them something like a Polyjuice Potion from Harry Potter (drinking it lets you turn into someone else) and they go to Sakura's room. Syaoran takes the potion to turn into Sakura and dresses in her clothes and then lets the real Sakura kill him (or if she can't do that, he kills himself). Yukito then enters the room to see two Sakuras: one dead and another one with a bloody knife in her hands. He captures the alive Sakura and brings her to the King telling what he had found in the room and that if cam only have one explanation: the assasin used the potion to turn into Sakura and enter the palace and killed real Sakura. Toya then orders Sakura to be tortured in most cruel ways as he believes her to be an assasin who killed his beloved sister. She is to be tortured until she reveals who ordered her to kill the princess, but Sakura knew she wouldn't be able to endure torture (and that was the way she wanted), so by Sakura's own request when Yukito captured Sakura he altered her memory so that while she still remembers who she is, she doesn't remember Syaoran's or Yukito's involvement in the plan. So even when unbearable pain breaks her will and she tells all the truth she knows, it is pretty much limited to the fact that she is real Sakura, and noone believes that (as they believe Yukito who, as a magician, claims she is the one magically disguised and not the dead Sakura). As the torture gets really unbearable, Sakura begs for death, but they torture her really long and painful in hope to make her speak, but as there's nothing more she can tell, in the end she dies of torture. As her spirit leaves her body, she sees Syaoran's spirit who was in the torture chamber all the time watching her sufferings with a gentle smile, and it makes Sakura remember everything and she smiles back as the accumulated sufferings burst in a feeling of... catharsis would be the right word, I guess? The torture appeared to be so unbearably painful that while she was experiencing it she was regretting having that dream and going for it, wishing she had never been born only so that she wouldn't have to experience that, but the point is feelings like that were exactly what Sakura dreamed of, otherwise it wouldn't be earnest torture. So Sakura is happy now and goes to afterlife togehter wih Syaoran.

Heaven and Hell Online


So let's say there's a VR MMORPG "Heaven and Hell Online" (HHO). The universe of the game consists of three worlds: Heaven, Earth and Hell. Heaven is home for playable faction of angels, and Hell is home for playable faction of demons. One can not enter other faction's home world, so they also can feel safe at their own. Girls are encouraged to play as angels and boys are encouraged to play as demons, thought it's not a must. A player can also choose the gender of their character, girls that play as angels and boys that play as demons mostly choose their real gender, however girls who choose to play as demons and boys who choose to play as angels often choose the faction's gender over their real one to blend into the faction more naturally. Earth is populated by NPC humans and is the battlefield where angels and demons fight for control over human souls (or gameplaywise control over settlements). What makes the game so special is the nature of battles between angels and demons. Angels don't believe in violence, so they can't attack by design. What for demons, they can't just mindlessly slaughter angels, which would make people see how angels were adamant enough in their beliefs to fearlessly accept death, and do no good for breaking people's belief's in good. Instead demons must make angels surrender, so that the people of the settlement see angels break which would make them lose their faith in angels' ideals of piece and love and fall under demons' ideals of violence and fear. So, what happens is demons torture angels (I guess, it works best 1v1 or in small groups) and possible outcomes are: 1) the angel can't bear it anymore and surrenders, that frees the angel from suffering by dying and then respawning in heaven, grants victory for the demon as the people of the settlement where the 'fight' took place see angel surrender and lose faith in them, 2) angel doesn't surrender until she dies of torture, her soul becomes visible as a glowing silhouette of herself that separates from the body, raises in the air and there materialises, meaning fast respawn on site indead of being returned to Heaven, instead the angel's resurrection creates an outburst of holy energy that drives the demon back to Hell; needless to say such a sight makes local population turm to angels' side, 3) there must also be some sort of time limit, but I'm not sure if time running out must grant win to the angel (as the demon failed to break their will in time) or it should be considered a draw, as too much time without a proper outcome makes public bored and they just go their ways, which makes both angels and demons lose influence in this settlement (so neutral settlements can exist). Also, for the sake of balance, as a demon can attack an angel, angel can also chalange demon to torture them which demon can not refuse (which is how angels go offensive).
Influence works somewhat like in Elite: Dangerous. Each settlement has 100% of influence divided between angels, demons and neutral, whoever has most influence controls the settlement. Big cities might be divided into districts, each of them treated as a separate settlement in having their own influence, so they can be controlled separately, and of course there's some bonus for controlling the whole city. By winning battles you lower another faction's influence, but it goes to neutral (or half to neutral and half to yours), also neutral influence grows with time, so you don't just take over a lot of cities and reap the benefits, you must maintain your influence in them so that they don't become neutral. You can turn neutral influence into your faction's (aside from maintaining influence in controlled settlements, it lets you take the neutral ones). Demons do that by seeding fear and despair in the hearts of people, which is performed by raping and torturing them, but unlike in battles with angels, demon's don't have to be so carefull not to kill the victim, as a couple of deaths would only seed even more fear in the hearts of the rest of the population. What for angels, they turn neutral influence into their own by sexually serving the people. The neccecity of maintaining the influence means the closer you are to controlling all of the world, ther harder it becomes to maintain control, which assures balance of power between factions. Also, the more the population is in a settlement, the slower influence changes.
The VR makes the player feel everhything their character feels (otherwise would be no point for angels to surrender), but in a way that their real body is not affected (wouldn't want them to die of heart attack when someone reapes their heart off in the game). As angels level up, they grow more resistant to pain, so that they can bear more tortures. And the trick is as you can bear more extreme tortures, the less extreme ones are so light in comparisson, you find you can actually enjoy them. Then you level up furhter and what was most extreme becomes less extreme in comparisson to new most extreme, so eventually you learn to enjoy more and more extreme torture. What for demons, as they level up, more torture methods becomes available to them. The other option is that there is no levels in game (like, again, in Elite: Dangerous), instead angel players natually grow more resistant to pain as they are constantly exposed to it, and demon players naturally master their skill of torture as they constantly practice it.
Also, I've just thought of 'fights' again. Maybe it would work better if time limit would mean angel's victroy, and angel's death without surrendering would mean a draw (as they didn't surrender, but didn't survive the torture either)? This would compel angels to actually try their best to endure the torture rather than dying of it while trying to keep their mouth shut about wanting to die.
There's also a possble storyline: as in the game players learn to enjoy torturing or being tortured, some of them at some point want to experience it for real. It has already led to several deaths, so Kirito (if we assume it actually happens in SAO universe and not just based on it) is asked to investigate. So he enters the game as a demon, and the girls also enter the game, but as angels (though one of them, say his sister, might also join demons). At some point he must torture Asuna or watch her being tortured. And as they become more and more involved with the game, instead of investigation, they start to honestly enjoy it, and at some point also want to try it for real. Oh! Maybe their investigation led them to a real-life meating of players where he is asked to torture Asuna to death to prove his loyality. He does that, but in the process discovers he enjoyed it a lot (and Asuna, surely, enjoyed it too), so in the end he doesn't hand them in to authorities, and instead honestly joins the group, and other girls who were watching join too (those who played as angels join to be tortured, and his sister who was a demon - to torture).
A bit on characters' appearence. Both angels and demons have wings and can fly (maybe only over controlled territories). Angels feel pain when their wings are torn off. Both angels' and demons' bodies are easy to make sexually excited, that makes angels always ready to sexually please people, and demons always ready to rape. Demon's dicks migth grow in size and even grow spikes as they level up (if there are levels). As there are no real battles, there's no need for armor of any sort. There are clothes, but as sex organs of both angels and demons are used often, they are usually left uncovered. The clothing of a low-ranked angel may consist of only a camisole, usually white or some pastel color, the clothing of a high-ranked angel might be something like this: http://g.e-hentai.org/s/dc156dd88d/642843-1 . The point is they are usually not totally naked (though, maybe, the lowest rank, the new players are), but the clothes are meant to emphasise their sexyness rather than hide it. There might be also clothes like short dresses and skirts that don't show pussy when an angel is on foot, but very much do so if they bend over or fly. Also, they usually don't have footwear (little need of it if you can fly). What for demons, maybe with leveling up their appearance changes from almost human-like (only with demon wings and perhaps horns) to purely demonic with red skin and such. What for clothing, the purpose of it for demons is not sexiness but fearsomeness, so they would either wear something fearful or if they are fearful enough by themselves - not wear anything. As they big erect dicks are fearful (as people are feared fo be raped with them), they would leave their dicks uncovered.
Aside from fighting the enemy faction and neutrals, there might be other things to do: crafting torture tools (for demons), something about healing (if death means draw) and/or pain resistance buffing for angels.
There also might actually be an overall goal of the game: if one faction manages to take control over all of the Earth world, they gain access to enter enemy faction's home world. Demons entering Heaven would be free to rape, torture and slaughter angels at their will as they don't need to worry about the influence in Heaven. What for angels in Hell, that's an interesting question. Perheps they will find there the most extreme tortures which by that point they would love to experience.
Here's also some watersports option: angels' urine is a sweet nectar, angels can reward people for loyality by letting them drink it. Most usually though angels just don't pay attention to their urge to pee and just let it flow. If angel pisses in flight and it lands on a person, that's considered a good omen. Demons' urine is acid and they also both deliberately use it to punish people and just randomly pee in flight with a chance it lands on someone unlucky.

> Also, I've just thought of 'fights' again. Maybe it would work better if time limit would mean angel's victroy, and angel's death without surrendering would mean a draw (as they didn't surrender, but didn't survive the torture either)? This would compel angels to actually try their best to endure the torture rather than dying of it while trying to keep their mouth shut about wanting to die.


I've thought on it again and realized it won't work this way. The demon can kill angel at any moment, so if time runs up, he would just kill the angel to turn defeat into a draw. So it should work like in the first option:
1. Angel can choose to die at any moment, so it should be considered her defeat
2. Demon can choose to kill the angel at any moment, so it should be considered his defeat
Now, what if time runs out... if it's a draw, demon can still lead the fight to a draw by not torturing the angel. But would counting it as demon's defeat ruin the balance? Angels would have 2 ways to win and demonds would only have one. But maybe that's actually a good thing to counter how the demons have all the initiative it battles. After all, they fully control the flow of the battle/torture while all angels can do is endure.

> There also might actually be an overall goal of the game: if one faction manages to take control over all of the Earth world, they gain access to enter enemy faction's home world. Demons entering Heaven would be free to rape, torture and slaughter angels at their will as they don't need to worry about the influence in Heaven. What for angels in Hell, that's an interesting question. Perheps they will find there the most extreme tortures which by that point they would love to experience.


Thought a bit on this part too. For the demons, let's say, the difference of torturing angels in Heaven is not only that they don't have to worry about losing, but that they can't lose as the angels won't have an option to end it by dying. What for angels' win, being tortured doesn't sound right after all... I mean, how is it differend from when they lose? So, maybe they get to torture the demons back? But that doesn't fit with them not believeing in violence to the point where they let themselves be tortured without fighting back. Let's see. It's all about power over souls, right? Demons win by breaking angels' souls. When, after taking Heaven, they can torture angels without a limit, that will probably break some souls so that in the next iteration they won't want to play as angels, but will want to try as demons instead. From the opposite side, maybe when angels take Hell, they shower demons with love and compassion to make them switch sides? That also sounds like an angelic thing to do.
The other option I thought of is winning the game somehow connected to offline meetings, but it probably doesn't make sense for only angels or only demons to gather. Thought maybe it's like that: when demons win, the hight-ranked demons get real addresses of hight-ranked angels, and it's their choise to go there and torture them (the angels also probably don't know that they addresses are revealed, so it's going to be a surprise for them), but if angels win, it's the other way around, so angels can choose if they want or don't want to go to meet demons in real life (and get tortured).
Or maybe it doesn't need speaking of winning in the first place, just let the demons continuously torture angels in their fight over human territories.
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