>>11187
I agree.
This kind of story looks as a description of the industrial process.
Girl comes, says something random, chop chop , repeat with another.

>>11201
The problem is not that they die but that they get out of the game as long they are done.

it would be more interesting to read about dickgirl explaining her experience while she is being fucked by another dickgirl whose tits are getting removed.

There was potential to write about one of them masturbating using her own dick as a dildo.

I would even include some failures for comical relief as o of those dick girls has the dick so big or so hard that De-Dicker breaks/or doesn't fit and they have to use some other way.
Or some of those blondes are so stupid that they only remove half of the dick and then complain that it does not work as expected.