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Thanks for replying! The grils don't back down because they have no reason to - either they wanted to die, or they feel it's their duty to do so. This story isn't really lighthearted, and it will get more serious in the 3rd part, but I'l possibly try writing something more lighthearted in the future. As for the age, most of the girls are in their high teens- Nanoha, Fate and Hayate are 19, Shari is 17, Teana is 16 while Subaru is 15. 15 is the lowest I'm okay with writing about.
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha SnufferS
Episode Two
Nanoha woke up to the feeling of someone groping her breasts. She slowly opened her eyes and saw it was Hayate who was doing that. They’ve been living together since that fateful conference. Had it really been a year already? Nanoha had trouble believing that. They only recently returned from a Riot Force 6 mission, and both them and Hayate’s knights, who were living in another apartment next door, were now on leave.
Nanoha got into an upright position, and pulled Hayate in for a quick kiss. Only then Hayate, satisfied for now, let go of her breasts.
“Hello Nanoha. Today’s going to be a big day for both of us.” Hayate told her, smiling, and Nanoha nodded back at her. “You ready for what you need to do?” Hayate asked her with concern in her voice, but Nanoha just nodded sheepishly again. “If so, then I should call Rein. Oh, and Shamal too as well.” Hayate commented, and opened a communication channel to the mage of winds. Shamal’s bright face flashed in front of them, the blonde blushing as she noticed the call. Nanoha briefly wondered why, but noticed that Shamal was only wearing a green bra and panties.
“Shamal, please come over and bring us the equipment I told you about yesterday, the door is unlocked. Try not to waste too much time putting more clothes on!” Hayate gave her servant her orders with a smile on her face.
“Yes, Master.” Shamal answered and Hayate cut the call. She could have sworn she’d seen Shamal undo her bra before that, but didn’t think much of it.
Next, Hayate opened a channel to Rein, whose face soon appeared before them. “Rein, it’s time. Are you sure you want to do this?” Upon seeing the Unison device nodding, she continued, “then please come to our room. Shamal’s already on her way.” Rein nodded again, then the call was cut.
Hayate’s attention turned towards Nanoha again, who was now walking around in her pink nightgown, visibly nervous because of what was about to happen. Hayate was still in own pyjamas, a white buttoned shirt and a short blue skirt. Since they were going to get started soon, she decided it was time to take them off. With a few quick pulls she got the shirt off, and the skirt followed suit as she sat on the edge of their bed.
When she was done, she raised her head only to notice Nanoha staring at her naked body with what almost seemed like regret. “Rein really wants to do this, love. It’s her choice to do so.”
Nanoha’s face lit up a bit. “I know. It’s just that… I don’t want to see another friend leave us,” she replied softly as she undid the buttons of her nightgown. She let it slide off her shoulders, leaving her fully naked.
Rein slowly walked through the open door to their bedroom. She was in her human form instead of the usual fairy one. It was a special occasion for all of them, after all.
“You don’t have to do this, Rein. We could just get back to Section 6 and live as we lived for the last few years.” Hayate nearly begged Rein to reconsider after she noticed she was there, but Rein simply shook her head. “I’ve made up my mind.” She commented as she began undressing. She was only wearing a light dress the color of her hair, and she hastily pulled it over her head and threw it on the ground. Her human form was still not very well developed, making her look like a 15-year old girl. Her long blue hair cascaded behind her as she proudly pushed her chest forward, her small breasts bouncing as she did. “I’m ready nooow!” She beamed enthusiastically while pressing her hands on both sides of her waist.
As if on cue, Shamal took this moment to arrive. She was wearing her Knight clothes - a long green-and-white dress with a light green jacket on top of it. In her arms she was holding various boxes that contained various recording equipment. She placed the boxes on top of one of the tables, and breathed heavily as she let go of the heavy burden.
“Thanks, Shamal. Now, let’s set all of this up.” Hayate commented as she walked over and started unboxing the cameras. As she and Shamal were installing the cameras and microphones in their spots, she knew she had to ask Rein one final time: “Are you 100% sure you want to die today?”
“I’m ready, Hayate,” Rein said with a look of sorrowful determination on her face. “I want to join my predecessor, and the anniversary of Signum-san’s death makes the most sense to do this.” Her face brightened up as she continued: “And I’m glad that you and Nanoha agreed to killing me intimately like this. I’m also fine with you recording it and distributing the recording - it’s one final way I can make some more people happy.” As she finished, she smiled happily.
The smile convinced Hayate that Rein was going to enjoy it, so all doubts disappeared from her mind. She put the last camera into its spot and looked up at the others. Since they all seemed ready, Hayate decided it was the time to start.
"We should get started now, there’s no point in waiting!” She told them energetically, and the other three nodded, before getting into place - Hayate and Rein in the focus of the cameras, with Shamal in the background and Nanoha staying off-camera. When Hayate gave her a thumbs-up, she walked over and activated all the cameras and microphones one by one. When all of them were on, Hayate turned towards one of the cameras and introduced herself.
“Welcome! I’m Hayate Yagami.”
“And I’m Reinforce Zwei!” Rein introduced herself as well.
“Rein is my Unison Device. However, a few days ago she requested my permission to kill herself. At first I wasn’t sure.”
The younger girl interrupted her. “But I told Master Hayate that today’s the anniversary of Signum’s death - she was one of Master’s knights. I also told her it was my time to join the first Reinforce - she died before I was created, but I still looked up to her, and here we are.”
Hayate waited for Rein to finish, then continued. “And after I agreed, I came up with the idea of filming her death so anyone who wants to watch it can do so. And you, viewer, are one of these people.” Hayate looked straight at the camera while saying the last sentence. Nanoha walked into the space that was being filmed, and stopped next to Hayate without saying a word.
“OK, let’s get started,” Hayate said cheerfully when she saw Nanoha by her side, and they both turned to face Rein, who had already placed her hands behind her back to make the next step easier.
“Are you ready, Rein?” Nanoha asked, sadness and finality resonating in her words.
“I’m ready, Nanoha,” Rein replied, smiling as she braced herself. “Do it.”
Nanoha nodded, clasping Raging Heart’s pendant. It took little effort to make the proper adjustments to the spell, though she’d need to recite the full modified incantation to cast it.
“Chains of the heavens, listen to my call,” she recited. “Bind my foe, and drain away her life. Restrict Lock!”
The pink magic bands appeared on Rein’s wrists, as expected, binding them together, ensuring she couldn’t even try to break away if she changed her mind. Another one appeared around her neck. There was a gap of about two inches between her neck and the band, but that gap began to disappear, albeit slowly.
Rein swallowed nervously, but maintained her smile. As she turned her gaze down for a bit, she was able to see the ring of pink energy encircling her neck, and how it was slowly shrinking. She knew her death was going to take a long time, as the band would eventually begin constricting around her neck, cutting off her air, but it was what she wanted.
Rein could feel the ring’s cold touch as it reached her neck. After she took a few breaths that were somewhat harder than before, Hayate came closer and leaned down, lining her face up with Rein’s. Rein’s eyes widened as Hayate’s lips connected with hers. Her master usually didn’t get that intimate with her, since she stayed in her fairy form most of the time, but that didn’t stop Rein from fantasizing about that. And her fantasies only materialized further as Hayate’s fingers touched her slit. Rein closed her eyes and moaned loudly against Hayate’s lips, surrendering herself to the pleasure. She kissed Hayate back with much more passion than what Hayate was expecting, but it was only a pleasant surprise to her.
Nanoha watched them make out, her body longing for something similar. Since her lover was busy, she had to satisfy that need by herself. However, Hayate asked her to do something else before they started. Controlling the urge for now, she walked over to Rein as well, stopping behind her. She pressed her breasts against Rein’s long hair as she leaned in, her mouth locking onto one of Rein’s ears as she licked it with her tongue. Nanoha’s hands went under Rein’s shoulders and closed over her breasts, further stimulating the blue-haired girl. If Rein felt great before, now her pleasure was magnified beyond what she thought was possible. Still, Nanoha’s lust was only strengthened by what she was doing, as well as Rein’s soft hair rubbing her nipples. Nanoha shifted her legs slightly, lining it up so that they had one of Rein’s legs between them, and she started rubbing her pussy against it, trying to quench at least some of her needs.
Hayate took notice of what Nanoha was doing, and it reminded her of her own arousal. She didn’t want to remove her hands from Rein, though - it was her last time to touch her and she couldn’t waste it. Instead, she contacted Shamal telepathically.
“Shamal, please come here and make me cum.” She could feel Shamal was trying to respond, but she just cut off the mental link and returned her focus to Rein. Hayate heard the slight noise of a spell being cast, but after she felt Shamal’s mouth touching her pussy so she didn’t think much of it. With her working on it, and her mouth entertained by Rein’s, Hayate knew she was on a quick way to coming.
Before that happened, Rein came from all the attention she was getting, letting out the loudest moan she did this day. She was still able to breathe, with her windpipe only halfway closed. Her legs were shaking as her cum ran down them and onto Hayate’s arm, but the brown haired mage wasn’t stopped by that and continued to touch her pussy. Nanoha didn’t give up either, but Rein could tell her rubbing against her leg was becoming more and more rapid.
Hayate was getting closer as well, but Shamal’s mouth stopped after Rein’s orgasm. Hayate broke away from Rein, and turned around to face Shamal, intending to ask why had she stopped. Instead, Hayate was dumbfounded as she stared upon her knight’s naked form. Hayate was used to seeing Shamal’s naked body, but she wasn’t expecting it now. She realised the sound from earlier must have been Shamal disabling her Barrier Jacket, and that she must have taken off her underwear after Hayate asked her to come here. Before Hayate was able to ask Shamal why was she naked, the blonde mage spoke instead:
“Master, I request permission to die now as well.” Hayate wanted to say something, but Shamal continued: “Since Rein asked to die, and really since Signum died, I’ve been thinking about this. I really loved the time I spent serving you, but it still doesn’t make up for the centuries I’ve been forced to live as a slave. I’m just too tired, and with Signum dead and now also Rein dying, it’s simply too much for me.” Tears flashed in Hayate’s eyes for a moment, but she forced them away. It was Shamal’s decision to make, after all.
With that worry out of the way, Hayate became a bit frustrated that Shamal couldn’t wait with that until she made her come. So when Shamal asked: “Please, master. Can you be the one to kill me?” Hayate was more than happy to oblige. “Fine, go over there and start touching yourself.” She told Shamal while pointing to an empty space that was still in range of some of the cameras.
Shamal moved there obediently, and began to touch herself as she was ordered to. Hayate walked towards her, grabbing her magical pendant on the way, working on her slit as well with her other hand. The two kept masturbating while watching each other, and because of Hayate’s earlier arousal, she was able to come fairly quickly. As soon as she did, she pulled the hand out of her snatch and enclosed both hands over the pendant, using it to cast a spell. A basic one, perhaps, but with a deadly modification.
“Come to me, o rings of binding. Cutting Bind!” A blue ring came into shape around Shamal’s neck. It was shrinking a lot faster than the ring around Rein’s neck. In no time it was touching against her skin. Shamal relaxed a bit as she felt it forcing its way into her neck, expecting it to start choking her like the spell cast on Rein. Instead, she was painfully surprised as it simply cut through her skin. She realised what was happening as her blood started trailing down her neck. The hand she was touching herself with sped up, Shamal trying to come before her life ended.
She didn’t get the chance, though. Her arms dropped limply to her sides as she lost control of them. And as she did, the ring contracted suddenly. It cut all the way through her neck, cutting it off completely before disappearing. Shamal only noticed what happened when her head slid off the neck, with her headless body collapsing as her head fell, blood geysering forth from the stump. “Freedom at last…” She thought after hitting the ground, and then she was gone.
Hayate stared at Shamal’s body as it twitched on the ground for a moment. Just when she was about to return to Rein, she was surprised yet again as Agito walked into the room, a kitchen knife in her hand. The fiery Unison Device looked furious, even more so than usual. She was in her human form just like Rein, looking about the same both in age and in body shape. She was only wearing a purple leotard. She kept her hair in red twintails, but it looked like it was about to catch fire because of her anger.
“Why didn’t anyone tell me that that foolish snow fairy was gonna die today? I can’t have her upstaging me like that, so I will die here as well.” Hayate briefly wondered why would Agito do that, but she understood that after Agito’s master died, she only pretty much lived for her rivalry with Rein. Without that, her life would lose its purpose.
As Hayate came to that conclusion, Agito pulled the leotard off her shoulders and down her legs, since she noticed all the other women were naked. With that done, she grabbed the knife again and took a deep breath. For all her talk, what she was about to do still made her a bit nervous. Her hand was shaking as the knife neared her throat.
Abruptly, someone embraced her from behind. Normally she’d be against any intimacy like that. For once, it helped her calm down, and she was able to easily open a gash in her neck. Blood spurted onto her chest and Hayate’s hands. The rapid blood loss quickly weakened her, and soon she was only standing because Hayate was holding her in place. Agito’s last look went towards Rein. Her mind bitterly noted that Rein was still alive, and that she was once again better than her. With that thought, she collapsed in Hayate’s arms. Hayate kept holding on to her for a moment, then let her go, finally getting back to Rein.
By this point, the modified Restrict Lock had completely closed off Rein’s throat. Her mouth was permanently open, Rein gagging and gurgling as her body tried to take in air, unable to even speak. She did her best to fight off the rising instinctual panic, though, just standing there patiently as Nanoha continued to fondle her, watching as first Shamal and then Agito’s lives were ended. Her hearing was growing muffled, her heartbeat and the rush of blood echoing in her ears, but she could still hear Nanoha’s moan as she came, her juices spraying onto Rein’s leg. Rein’s blue eyes moved slowly towards Hayate as the brunette walked over, and her eyes shifted downwards as Hayate went to her knees, her head sinking between Rein’s legs.
Even though she was very weakened at this point, Rein could still feel the touch of Hayate’s tongue as it entered her snatch. The pleasure seeping into her body as Hayate did that relieved some of Rein’s pain caused by the burning in her lungs. Nanoha’s hands moved onto her breasts again after she calmed down, but Rein barely noticed that. Her gaze was locked onto the top of Hayate’s head as the last slivers of energy were leaving her body. WIth whatever strength she could still muster, she bent her lips into a smile as her vision went dark.
As life left Rein’s body, Nanoha’s spell burned out. Without it keeping Rein’s body upright, it collapsed forwards onto Hayate as Nanoha couldn’t keep it standing. Hayate removed her head from Rein’s slit and gently laid her down on the floor. She felt magical energy returning to her, the energy she used to bring Rein to life those 9 years ago. The surge of energy moved her, but she knew she had other obligations before that. She bent over and forced Rein’s eyelids down, then stood up and faced the camera.
“Thanks for watching, dear viewers. Only Rein was supposed to die today… That must have been a nice surprise, right?” As Hayate was speaking, Nanoha walked up to her and embraced her. Hayate pulled her in for a deep kiss, making sure it was caught by the cameras before she turned them off, making sure the movie ended with a nice shot of the two alive women standing between the bodies of the dead three.
After they kissed, Nanoha finally burst into tears, sobbing as she spoke:
“Oh Hayate, we lost 3 f-friends today. Even just Rein would have been very s-sad, but this was a lot more painful than what I was prepared for.” Hayate was about to respond, but Rein’s body took just that moment to dissipate in a flash of white light. Hayate immediately burst into tears herself, remembering how the original Reinforce died those 11 years before. They stood there, sobbing together and hugging tightly, but finally Hayate was able to calm down a bit. As Nanoha was still sobbing, Hayate remembered that Nanoha was still missing Fate. Even if she did her best to act as Fate’s replacement, Hayate knew nothing could hold up to one’s first love. Just as no one would be able to replace Nanoha for her if she died.
“I know how much it hurts love, but we still have each other.” Hayate told Nanoha and Nanoha’s face brightened up a bit. “And we are never going to be separated like that.” Hayate went on, and Nanoha finally stopped sobbing.
“And if we were ever to die, we’d die together,” Nanoha replied with affection and excitement in her voice.
“If that ever happens, I promise we will,” Hayate answered.
Nanoha just nodded enthusiastically. “I promise as well.” And the two kissed again, their passion reignited anew.
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