>>11328



As the one who requested that story, I am quite pleased, indeed. I probably would have spent more time dwelling on each of the girls being strangled, the cord pressing on their throats, and such, but that's just because I'm a sadistic creep who loves a pretty girl's throat.



I was the one who asked for that Alexa vs Misha story a little while ago, so you can tell that wanting more detailed strangling is just a personal preference, and not any shortcoming of your writing.