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This one's a little different than the first two - there's one cons death here, but all the others are non-con. We originally planned to do something similar to Episode One, and it's still coming, but when thinking of why would the rest of them would want to die this is what we came up with. As it grew longer I figured it's better to split it into two parts.
>>11315
Caro and Erio were already planned to be in this one, but Lutecia's here because you asked :)
>>11318
Okay, I see your point - but if a character feels like a child to me, then the most they get is nudity and a clean, nonsexual death like the ones in this part
Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha SnufferS
Episode Three (1)
Lutecia Alpine and her new friend were inside an abandoned warehouse in the middle of some city. The other girl convinced her to come there to try out a certain new summoning spell she found. “All preparations are complete.” Lutecia told her green-haired companion in her typical calm voice. The other girl, who looked a few years older than Lutecia, smiled at her brightly. “We’re both not ready yet.” She told her.
“We’re not?” Lutecia asked her, as the other girl grabbed the short green dress she was wearing and pulled it down her body. Lutecia couldn’t help but stare at the girl’s exposed cleavage and pussy, wondering why she did that - and why didn’t she wear any underwear.
“We both need to be naked for the spell to work.” The explanation didn’t make a lot of sense to Lutecia - why would a summoning spell require her to do that? She briefly considered not trying the spell out, but the amount of work she put into preparations for it made her think not trying now would be a waste.
“Fine, I will do that then.” The young summoner undid the belt that was holding her black dress close to her body, then pulled it off, letting it slide down her legs and leaving her in her underwear. As her friend looked on expectantly, Lutecia took off her black bra and panties as well, exposing her flat chest and simple clean slit. She put all her clothes on a nearby stone slab. Since the other girl gave her a thumbs-up, Lutecia walked towards the magical circle that they prepared earlier, and the two of them joined together in a magical chant.
When they finished it, a bright red circle opened in the fabric of space, and then expanded rapidly. Lutecia just stared as the portal opened, wondering briefly if everything was going okay. To her surprise, a few demons emerged from the portal and walked straight towards her. She knew demon summoning was never a good idea, with the demons being far too treacherous to control reliably. Before she could think of undoing the spell, the demons were already on both sides of her. She felt a stab of pain shooting through her chest as one of the demons sliced across her chest with his hand. Lutecia’s gaze escaped towards the other girl, hoping that maybe she could help her, and only saw her looking similarly terrified, but not yet noticed by the demons.
Her attention was forced to return to the demons near her, as they lifted her from the ground, each one grabbing her by one of her hands. She started screaming in pain as both demons pulled in opposite directions, and both of her arms were forcefully torn away from the rest of her body. Her calm mindset was shattered by the pain, and she broke into tears as she fell on the cold floor. She didn’t stay there for long - the demons grabbed her ankles next, and after a painful split where she hung upside down, her legs were torn off as well. Her limbless torso plummeted to the floor, and since she was falling head first, Lutecia hit herself on the head. A veil of darkness took over her mind as the hit knocked her out, never to wake up again.
The older girl watched what happened to Lutecia with some wetness between her legs, hiding behind some rubble. The army of demons was coming out of the portal at an alarming speed, and it was only a matter of time before they found her. And once they did, she hoped she’d have some fun with them before her time ran out.
Vita was flying around, a bit annoyed. She heard that the mission wasn’t going very well, with the enemy outnumbering them far more than anticipated. Some stupid mage just had to open a portal to some demon world - how dumb you need to be to do something like that? For some reason, it also disabled their magical communications, also contributing to her grumpy mood. Still, it only meant more fighting for her, and she was fine with it. As she noticed another group of enemies on the ground beneath her, she flew downwards, landing next to some ruined building. When she was a few feet off the ground, she noticed Zafira on the ground in the middle of some rubble.
“Hey Zafira, having some trouble with these guys?” She asked him while walking towards him, keeping her hammer just in case. “C’mon big guy, answer me!” She spoke up since he didn’t answer her. She stopped just next to him, and was greeted with a gigantic burn across his other side, one obscured to her before that. “Are you okay, Zafira?” She touched him with one of her hands, and what she sensed terrified her. The complete lack of life she felt didn’t feel possible, it didn’t feel real.
She stared at Zafira’s body for some more time, her mind crushed under the realization that she was now the last survivor of the Wolkenritter. She stood in place, shaking, until she noticed some demons moving in front of her.
“Graf Eiseeeen!” She screamed, rage overflowing her.
“Zerstörungsform!” Her hammer shifted in her hands, sensing her anger and growing in size, with a drill forming on one side. Vita turned towards the enemy demons who she assumed killed Zafira. The red mage jumped towards them with an angry scream, not caring for anything that could get in her path. Losing herself in what she did best – destroying anything that stood before her – was the only way she could forget about her grief.
Subaru struggled in her bonds. She was certain she could break free, but she knew that it might not be fast enough. She could see Caro Ru Lushe struggling against similar binding magic nearby, but what mattered more was the red-haired boy locked in a battle in front of them. Erio Mondial was fighting however he could to protect them against a group of sword-wielding demons, but it was clear to Subaru he was going to be overwhelmed sooner or later. With how hard Caro was struggling, so different from her usual, calm demeanor, Subaru was sure that the support mage also knew that was the case.
Caro’s magic was supporting Erio, but it turned out not to be enough. With his each dodge, Erio’s next move became slower and slower. Finally, he couldn’t dodge fast enough, and an attack hit him. The demon’s sword hit him on his right shoulder, cutting all the way through him diagonally and exiting at his left hip. “No! Erio!” Caro screamed as she and Subaru saw the boy fall. Another sword impaled him through the chest as he lay on the ground, causing Caro to scream again.
Subaru’s bonds finally snapped as the demons turned towards her. With a battlecry, she ran towards them, not really sure she’d be able to fight them. Before she got any close, however, a long-range magical blast burned through all the demons in front of them. “Thanks, Hayate.” She muttered towards the glowing form of their commander floating in the sky, then turned towards Erio. She knelt next to him, but she already knew it was too late. Sorrow hit her as she noticed he was already dead, but she knew she shouldn’t focus on that now. She got up and ran back towards Caro, who was still staring at Erio’s body.
“Caro? You okay there?” Subaru asked her gently, but the pink haired mage looked like she didn’t hear her. Subaru grabbed her by her arms, getting her head on the level of Caro’s. “You alright?” Subaru asked her while looking directly into Caro’s eyes. She could exactly tell the moment Caro snapped out of her shock. Caro’s face twisted in pain at the loss of the boy she loved. Subaru hugged her, knowing just how much pain the younger girl was in.
When she let go, Caro looked up at her, crying freely. “Thank you, Subaru. Could you tell me how you handled losing Teana? I honestly don’t think I can live on like that.” Subaru’s mind was struck with pain - as always when she was reminded of Tia’s death. “Honestly, I’m not sure I know the answer to that.” She replied, trying to stay calm. Caro looked at her with disappointment. “If t-that’s the case, then I might as well d-die now.” Her soft voice was cracking as she said that, and Subaru looked at her with bewilderment. Was she going to lose not one, but two friends today?
That seemed to be the case as Caro undid the bow holding her white cape in place, letting it float to the floor. Her dress was already tattered by all the fighting, so she decided that taking it off was a good idea - she wouldn’t want Fried to get any stomach problems because of it, anyways. Subaru simply watched as Caro pulled the dress over her head, showing she too followed Hayate’s policy of no underwear being allowed. Caro’s young, naked form shook from the cold a bit as she took off her shoes and hat.
When she was done, she channeled the magic through her device. “Friedrich! Come to me!” She called for her dragon to appear in his unsealed form. As she did, she spoke towards him: “Hello, Fried. I have a final order for you.” Caro told him, causing him to roar sadly at her. “I want you to eat me. I know you can do that - and then you’re free to do as you please.” The dragon howled at her again as she proudly presented herself to him.
Subaru was sure she couldn’t overpower both Caro and her dragon with his full strength free. And when she tried moving, the dragon just roared angrily in her direction, firing a warning fireball at her to make sure she wouldn’t interfere. Since the communications with the rest of the unit were down, Subaru could only watch hopelessly as Caro prepared to be eaten.
Suddenly, before Subaru could realise what was happening, Friedrich moved his head downwards, his mouth stretching as it opened far more than usual. In one quick move, half of Caro’s body was inside the dragon’s mouth. Fried shifted his head upwards, and Caro’s legs wiggled slightly as she was turned upside down. Fried started shaking his head slightly, and Caro slid further down his gullet. Subaru watched with terror as Caro’s legs disappeared down the dragon’s mouth, the young summoner no longer visible. Subaru could still see the outline of Caro’s body as it slid further down the dragon’s neck. The outline disappeared quickly, and Subaru understood that the summoner was now inside her companion’s stomach. The dragon roared sadly, looking at Subaru as if to tell her he was in grief as well, then took off, his wings flapping wildly as he searched for a calm place to digest his meal.
As Subaru watched the dragon fly away, her mind took in the fact that she was now the last of the Forwards she joined Riot Force 6 with. Caro’s question also reminded her how much she missed Teana, and she realised the young girl might have been far more courageous than her - she actually killed herself to join her loved one. However, watching her do that convinced her she could do it as well. “I wonder if I’ll get the occasion to join Tia soon…” She thought to herself while waiting for the communications to come back up, searching for some more demons to defeat.
Hayate was floating high in the air, giving her a nice view of the area where the demons were. She had her long range magic all set up, and was slowly blasting her way through the demons, one group at a time. It seemed to her that the demons have caught attention of her, since she noticed a small flock of demons flying towards her. Unfazed by that, Hayate charged up another spell, aiming for a group of the demons on the far edge of the demon horde. Just as she was about to fire, one of the demons flew close enough to her that she looked at it. It was a simple imp, but it was a female one. It was also naked, and despite its skin being orange its small breasts and small pussy made her think of Rein. She shook her head to clear it of those distracting memories, but her hand has already moved a bit. She fired off the spell, and watched with terror as it obliterated a building beyond the edge of the demon territory. A building, that Hayate knew wasn’t evacuated yet.
She immediately broke off the long range shooting setup, her attention turning towards the imp swarm that was about to reach her. She easily disposed of them, but each one of them reminded her of Rein as their small bodies faded away one by one. When she was done with them, she returned to the long range shooting mode started to shoot at the demons again. However, her mind was now distracted, thinking of Rein and how she usually helped her with this kind of magic. Because of how distracted she was, she missed a couple more shots and some of them also destroyed a few more buildings - with more civilians inside.
Fortunately, her magic managed to wipe off most of the demons, with the remainder of their army stuck guarding the portal. Hayate knew this was not going to be the case for much longer, since she asked Nanoha to go there and take care of the portal.
And that’s exactly what Nanoha was trying to do. She was easily making her way through dozens of demons as she neared on the portal. The orange glow in the air and the increasing number of demons only made her more certain she was going in the right direction. Eventually, she saw the portal itself, hidden within the ruins of a huge warehouse. On the floor of the warehouse near the portal she could see the naked torso of a young girl, with her arms and legs torn away. Nanoha she assumed was the one who opened the portal. As she got closer, she noticed with some surprise that it was Lutecia Alpine, a girl she remembered from the JS incident. Nanoha landed in front of her body, preparing to close the portal. Before she did, she heard whimpering coming from behind some rubble. Always willing to help people in need, she walked over to see who it was.
It turned out to be another young girl. Her green hair was disheveled, and Nanoha could that see the girl’s face and pussy were dripping with demon spunk. She was curled up on the with her arms covering her naked, sizeable chest. She looked at Nanoha with fear in her eyes, and Nanoha felt pity for the girl. “Don’t worry, you’re safe now. We’re here to save everybody.” Nanoha told her with a kind smile, and the girl’s red eyes lit up as she heard that. Nanoha approached her and offered her a hand. The girl reluctantly took it, and got up, her chest still covered with one hand. Nanoha led her out, and a blast from her staff destroyed another demon that just came through the portal. The girl moved in fear as she saw that, and Nanoha let go of her hand.
“Before we go, I still have to close this thing. Please, wait for me as I do that.” Nanoha told the girl, then turned towards the portal. Her Device flashed as she started preparing her spell again.
However, before she was able to cast the spell, something crashed into her hard from the side. Warm claws cut through the side of her Barrier Jacket, opening a few small cuts in the side of her belly. She was flung to the side, her battle dress flying off in the other direction, leaving her just in a long-sleeved jacket that ended just beneath her breasts, leaving her bottomless because of Hayate’s ‘no underwear’ policy. As she crashed against the side of the building, she was able to notice what attacked her - and was greatly surprised to see the girl she helped. However, the girl looked different now. Her whole body turned orange, with curved horns springing out of her head and a tail flailing between her legs. Her long claws were dripping with Nanoha’s blood, and any trace of fear disappeared from her face, replaced with a smug grin.
“You’re pretty tough, mage. If you weren’t, I’d be licking your guts off my claws already. Still, I cannot let you close the portal. I spent too much time convincing that stupid girl to actually open it to let that happen.” With the explanation out of the way, the succubus ran towards her again. Nanoha flew upwards, barely dodging the slice with which the demoness tried to hit her. Since Nanoha was flying away, wings sprouted from the succubus’s back as she flew after Nanoha.
Mid-air, Nanoha turned around to face the demon, flying backwards and up. From what the succubus said, Nanoha understood she was behind this demon attack, so taking her out straight away was a top priority. She fired off a few quick spells to test how strong the demoness was, but with no success. The demon struck back at her, throwing some flames, but Nanoha easily caught it with a shielding spell. Since weak magic wasn't working, Nanoha stopped her ascent so she could prepare one of her stronger spells. They were now high enough for Nanoha to hope Hayate or anyone else who was on this mission would notice them, and help if things went badly.
The succubus was flying slower than Nanoha did, so it took her more time to fly to the altitude where Nanoha stopped. She could see magical circles appearing around the orange-haired mage, but she knew she couldn't do anything about that. Just as she stopped her ascent, finally letting her wings rest a bit after the rapid fluttering that let her rise quickly, Nanoha screamed.
“Divine Buster!” Nanoha’s most trusted spell lit up the sky as a pink beam emerged from her staff, engulfing the demoness fully. She barely had any chance to shield herself, but still managed to protect herself from any major injuries. She used up quite a lot of energy to do that, but she flew through the beam Nanoha was shooting. When Nanoha’s spell ended, the succubus was close enough to try for another cut. Nanoha’s Barrier Jacket saved her life again, as instead of puncturing her lungs, the claws only tore the jacket apart, leaving deep cuts in Nanoha’s tits.
Nanoha cried out in pain again, her mind desperately coming up with a new plan. Not many opponents were able to withstand a Divine Buster, and she knew she had to act fast or the demon would end her. With that in mind, she flew off again, trying to put as much distance between her and her enemy as she could. She could see the demoness staying in place, licking the blood and fat of her breasts from her claws with her long tongue. When her attention returned to Nanoha, the Ace of the Sky was far enough to set her idea in motion. Magical binds appeared around the succubus’s limbs, holding her in place. She could break them, but it was going to take her some time. Time, which Nanoha spent charging up her most powerful spell.
With the air already being filled with magic from all the spells that were cast during the day, it was quite easy for Nanoha to ready her trump card. Syphoning magic from the air to speed up the process only made the glowing white ball of energy grow faster. Just as the demoness was about to break free from her bounds, snapping one of her hands out of the magical ring, Nanoha swung her staff into the white sphere, and a gigantic white beam with a pinkish hue fired from it, going towards the succubus with inconceivable speed.
The succubus’s eyes widened with fear during the instant she had to react, her free hand instinctively calling up whatever energy she had to protect herself. She would have problems defending herself from that attack even at her full strength, but the fight, along with the tiring work of keeping the portal open, exhausted her far too much. The beam crashed into her, erasing her from existence almost instantly as her entire body was vaporized. She didn’t even have a chance to feel any pain before dying, gone without a trace as the beam went further on.
Nanoha expected the demon to put up more resistance to her spell, and she could only watch in horror as the Starlight breaker flew on. With the way she and the succubus were positioned, it was flying in a line that was almost parallel to the ground. The slightly downwards angle, however, made it descend towards the surface, and as it approached the ground it tore through several buildings far beyond the border of the evacuated area before finally stopping. Nanoha’s only ray of hope in that was that at least the civilians didn’t suffer, not even knowing that they were dead.
Suddenly, Nanoha heard an explosion below her. Her eyes snapped downwards, and were greeted with a blazing crater in the place of the warehouse with the portal. She realized the portal must have been directly connected to the demoness she just killed. She could only hope that everyone who lived there had already evacuated. With her task there over, and with a heavy heart, Nanoha flew away towards the small form of Hayate floating on the horizon.
Hayate looked over the ruined city. With the portal gone, their magical communications started working again, and she was more and more heartbroken as the reports started to come in. She heard of the massive destruction that was caused by their magic, and the civilian deaths only made it worse. And when Subaru and Vita came back, sharing what they saw, Hayate couldn’t help but feel completely crushed. When Nanoha finally arrived back, Hayate just fell into her shoulders, crying freely as the group made their way back to the base via helicopter.
“Hello, Hayate. I’m glad you agreed to meet us this quickly.” Admiral Chrono Harlaown stood up from his desk and shook hands with Hayate as she entered his office. “I wish the circumstances on this were better, though.” Knight of the Saint Church Carim Gracia commented sadly. “You really messed up badly this time.” Chrono told Hayate after the three settled into chairs at his desk.
“I know, I really regret what’s happened back there.” Hayate answered as her mind went back towards the last mission her squad took on. “Between you and your mages, you destroyed pretty much an entire city. Civilians dead were measured in thousands.” Hayate nodded sadly.
“Well, we finished our objective at least.” She replied halfheartedly.
“That’s not an excuse for what happened! We don’t really want to do this, but our superiors told us you should retire from your post. We can’t protect you after something like that, but at least we will set up so that all your mages would be relocated to different sections instead of retiring with you.” Carim told her sadly, and was surprised when Hayate smiled back at her.
“I was actually expecting something like that before, and discussed that heavily with my unit. One thing was very clear – they didn’t want me to take all the blame for what happened, even though I asked them to reconsider repeatedly. However, we came up with something different. Something that will probably satisfy the higher-ups as well.”
As she explained the idea, both Chrono and Carim agreed it could work. After getting their guarantee that they would convince their superiors to agree to her suggestion, she happily left the Bureau’s HQ and returned to the current base of Riot Force 6. She had an event to plan, and she was happy to work on it.
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