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>>11439
Interesting idea! I'm not sure I can see precisely what you're imagining, but I'd be very interested to read an alternative ending if anyone wanted to write one.

Personally I find the humiliation of arrogant people very satisfying, so I was looking to emphasize Novahawk's humiliation as much as possible, which meant Bunny had to keep her breasts.

I have vague thoughts of a sequel where Bunny loses her breasts, but no solid ideas yet. I imagine Bunny and Novahawk facing off again, but this time Bunny would be the arrogant one because of her previous victory. The irony of Bunny taunting Novahawk for having no breasts would be hilarious when Bunny is about to lose her own breasts.

It would also be nice to give the two a chance to properly use their powers, fly around, and satisfy their anger with punches. Maybe after Novahawk destroys Bunny's breasts they could be caught in a situation where they would be forced to work together, a situation that was developing during their epic fight but they ignored it to focus on each other.
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