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> According to your story Bunny is arrogant one as she initiated actually started everything with her bragging about being superior and mocking Novahawk.

Not at all! Bunny was totally innocent. She wasn't bragging; she was just telling the truth. She had no idea how her words were affecting Novahawk.

Bunny is capable of bragging and mocking if she gets angry, and if I ever get enough ideas for the sequel then we'll certainly see how that looks.

> I will try to write alternative ending on how it should end.

Looking forward to it!
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