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>>That certainly makes Novahawk seem far nicer and friendlier. Just shrinking Bunny by half? It's like Novahawk cares about what happens to Bunny and doesn't want to hurt her too badly.

Novahawk is not a villain, after all, she is not supposed to do something so terrible to her teammate, not only because this is a bit too much, but because it will be very hard to explain to her team why she poisoned bunny.

>.I love the idea of forcing them to choose between losing their breasts and losing their lives. I wish they were a bit more reluctant to make that choice. Heroes are ready to lay down their lives, but giving up their breasts isn't part of the job description. Even so, I guess realistically the choice is obvious.

I was trying to make them more reluctant but simply failed to write that well because of time constraints :)
In this scene, I also revealed Novahawks leadership qualities what is required to solve their disagreement, because Bunny just panicked when she ended in the really serious situation without any clue whast to do.

"The thing that really bugs me is how quick they are to believe anything that the Overlord says. He writes "breast shrinker" on a bottle and they believe it. He tells them that their breasts have become bombs, and they're willingly ripping their own breasts off. It's like they never consider that he might lie."


That's because they are just dumb bimbos after all. What else can you expect from superheroes with huge tits? LOL
However, it is not that unusual because Novahawk stole chemical from Overlord base when she raided it last time. There is no reason to expect that fake label.
Later she made checkup with her computer to make sure that Overlord is not lying.
Also as we knoiw, villains never lie about their plans. LOL

I will read your changed version later and maybe even wrote second part of my own