Thank you all for your kind words. Yeah, I'm pretty happy with the pacing that I ended up with. I just haven't had a lot of time to write recently.



My plans going forward for this story are basically to have Cho get to see the dish she made eaten in the great hall, followed by a couple of vingette scenes of public exhibitionism and Hermione reinforcing her ownership.



Also a side plot in the background with Ron and Megan Jones.