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> Better than before because now the story is pretty consistent and logical. Unlike the first version where lots of things were lacking logic.

What do you mean specifically? I'm not sure which one I like better, but I do like how the original version leaves things open to a sequel by letting Bunny keep her breasts. I don't know what logic stuff you're referring to.

> You gave too little screen time for actual breast destruction.

I have to agree. I like the emotional impact and the character interactions that surrounded the gore more than the gore itself, but even so I should have done more with Bunny's surgery at the end. Perhaps I should do an expanded version of that.

> I doubt if in that kind of world they don't have some better experimental technology than implants or prosthetics.

There's no telling what technology may bring or fail to bring. I think it would take away a big part of the impact if breasts could be replaced. I was hesitant to even mention implants and prosthetics because it's more interesting if they're forced to live with their loss.
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