>>11456
In the first version, it was not clear how she got breast melting that chemical and why she even have it.
Attacking teammate in so horrible way was too dumb because how she will explain that to her team? It would make much more sense to kill her or just spill that chemical in her by accident but definitely not to do what she did.

Except that this kind of story can be explained by superhero logic as everyone behaves like a fool in those stories and logic behavior is something that does not make sense LOL

Sure this kinda ends everything but on the other hand, we already got that sequel as they both lost boobs LOL


>> I like the emotional impact and the character interactions that surrounded the gore more than the gore itself.

Yes, that pretty obvious as you focus your stories on that aspect.
You do this part well.
I prefer to make story focused on the action and gore without bad emotions. So I was trying to make that graphics part as long and complex as possible even if it starts looking silly.

I had no time but I had some interesting ideas how bunny was going to lose her breasts in the hard way.


>>I was hesitant to even mention implants and prosthetics because it's more interesting if they're forced to live with their loss.
Actually, if you say so, it would be better not to mention that at all unless you want o present that as kind of sarcasm which is supposed to hurt them emotionally even more
I would assume that they could get a much better solution by default and everyone reading story can think about what suits them best especially that in this kind of world this not really a problem.
Your ending is somewhat disappointing because it ruins all expectations.

The reason to use that advanced technology is not so much to fix them but to make even more trouble :)

I had an idea that they later try to use some experimental technology to grow back breasts but start competing for whose is going to be bigger or just screw up something until they end with something way bigger than expected(not something in the size of the whole room but just big enough to impair their movement a bit). Or maybe breasts can continue growing over months until they become too big. This will end with the team deciding that they have to get rid of their new tits because otherwise, they are useless fighters or something like that.