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> Attacking teammate in so horrible way was too dumb because how she will explain that to her team?

I seriously considered having Bunny ask about that and thereby giving Novahawk a chance to explain her evil scheme, but when writing the story there never seemed to be a good moment for it. Novahawk was going to lie to the team about what happened, and she expected to be believed. She'd intimidate Bunny into confirming the story under threat of losing her powers.

> I had no time but I had some interesting ideas how bunny was going to lose her breasts in the hard way.

I look forward to it.

> Your ending is somewhat disappointing because it ruins all expectations.

What expectations do you mean?

>I had an idea that they later try to use some experimental technology to grow back breasts but start competing for whose is going to be bigger.

That is hilarious. Maybe I'll give that a try.
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