>>11665

Very hot read, thanks for sharing. Certainly never seen that before! Hadn't even considered that for my own story. Hmm...I'll think about it though

>>11666
Glad you liked it, and that's really lovely to hear you've been inspired to give writing a chance! You're right to add detail before posting, don't rush it and post it when you think you've done all you could. Looking forward to it! :)