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Chapter 1: The turning tide

"Come on mom! I have cleaned my bedroom TWICE this day" shouted Michelle through the living room.
"Michelle... I'm just asking you to pick up your laptop from your bed and put it on the desk. I do not want to punish you" said Michelle's mom, Patricia, who was a freed woman.
Needless to say, Michelle was starting to be a teenage, trying to be rebelious and making a storm for anything. She stormed out of the living room going upstairs, entering her bedroom and placing the laptop on the desk. Then she shouted "I'm done doing that! Do you want me to go outside and bring stupid things from the supermarket!?"
Unfortunately for her, that was enough for Patricia to stop cooking and go directly to Michelle's room.
"What did you just say, little lady?" asked patrica with anger in her tone.
"What you heard, old lady" answered Michelle, defiance was to be found in her voice.
"You know what Michelle? I will take that. Go get a stupid onion, a stupid carrot and a stupid potato. You will be eating broth today, not the T-bone I was cooking for each of us. After you return, you are grounded. That means no TV, no celphone and no going out with your friends. You can keep the laptop. You need it for your school" expressed Patricia.
"Wha-tev-er you want, m'lady" mouthed Michelle before shunning her mother aside and going down the stairs towards the door.

As she stepped out of her house she headed to the supermarket. She was fighting to hold back her tears. She hated being grounded, and almost hated her mom for grounding her and taking away her T-bone.
When she made it to the supermarket she saw a beggar girl asking for money, and just before Michelle entered the supermarket, she saw a man approaching the girl and starting to take his penis out. Michelle was accustomed to watching that kind of scenes, where women were ordered and almost forced to do things. She considered it normal and she knew she was fortunate enough to never have experienced that kind of thing.
After picking the vegetables she made her way to the checkout lane and paid for them. When she exited the supermarket, Michelle saw the girl was being vaginally penetrated by the same man who was giving the girl some coins.

Michelle arrived at her house, opened the door and headed towards the kitchen, where her mom was cooking the 2 T-bones and boiling the water for Michelle's broth.
"I-I'm here mom... Sorry for my attitude half an hour ago. Here are the things you asked me to get. It was 7.46 dollars."
Patricia, who was a bit more relaxed answered her daughter "Thanks Mich, though this won't de-ground you, you need time to reflex on what you did and why it is bad"
Michelle was expecting her mom to lift the grounding, but when Patricia said that, it ignited Michelle's brain again, ready to confeont her mom, but she knew if she did that, Patricia would make the grounding even worse, so Michelle only mouthed "No problem, I'll be upstairs".

She closed her door, picked her laptop and laid down on the bed. She started to cry silently. She couldn't believe she was grounded again for a stupid reason. After she calmed a bit she opened her laptop and connected to Facenook. She had 35 unread messages, 23 new notifications and 2 friend requests. She knew she had gained a lot of popularity from posting her cosplays and she loved being the center of attention. But now she was a bit sad and ignored all her notifications and instead sent a message to Dane, her cosplaying sidekick. Michelle would cosplay 2B from Nier Automata and Dane would cosplay A2, so they where like sisters.

The message read "i hate my mom. Shes like... Idk, i think shes mad at me or smt. What U think?"
Not even 30 seconds later, Dane replied the message, saying "u know, moms tend 2 b like the frenemy u will always have. Don't worry Mich, u will b alright"

With that, Michelle started a lenghty conversation with Dane, about cute boys, next cosplays, popular anime and videogames.
Time flyed by when Michelle heard her mom call her to eat, so Michelle closed the laptop and set it on the desk, then she almost ran down the stairs, she was a bit hungry.
By the time Michelle sat at the table, the door rang and Michelle, trying to lessen her grounding, went to answer it. It was Michelle's dad, James. They both hugged and sat at the table, with Patrica and James enjoying the T-bone and Michelle spooning her broth.

Hopefully for Michelle, it was friday, so she would be free the next day, or so she tought. Saturday morning her day came into her room, waking her up and saying "Mich, I have been talking with your mom, and she told me that little thing you did. That, added with the previous experiences we have had with you, we came to the concuasion that you need to be put into a corrective school. The thing is, that school operates weekends only and today is your first day. Get dressed with this uniform. I will wait you in the car".

"Great, now I have no breaks from that stupid school and I will need to get up early. Awesome" said Michelle silently when James exited her room.
The uniform was quite simple, it consisted in a white blouse, pleated above the knee skirt and thighighs. She was accustomed on wearing these since too many cosplays required them.

When Michelle was dressed she made her way into the car, taking the copilot seat and they went into the school. When they arrived Michelle saw with horror that the school had 5 meter high walls with barbed wire on top. This looked like a prison for her, but she had no choice, so she exited the car and walked towards the entrance.

Following a map she had, she walked through halls and corridors, delving deeper into the school and seeing the usual things like girls being gang raped, girls being used as human lockers and a girl that was limping. Just before Michelle entered her classroom, she heard a voice behind her "On your knees". She turned to face the person who said that and she was rewarded with a punch on her cheek. "I said on your knees, do you know what an order is?". Michelle, fearing he might do anything else complied and knelt infront of him. "I'm Lewis, looks like you're new around here. This is indeed a correction school, but some of us are here for the fun. You will obey me inside and outside the school. You're a woman, remember?". Michelle wanted to stand up and punch him until he died, but she knew she would be in deep trouble if she did, so she only mouthed "Yes".
"Awesome!. Now, follow me, I think you are going to skip that class"
"Bu-but this is my first class! I can't miss my first class" cried Michelle.
"Yes, you can and you will, follow me" and Lewis started walking down the corridor with Michelle behind him.

Lewis made sure no one was following them and opened a small locker. It was wide enough for a guy like Lewis to enter sideways and go down a small flight of stairs. Lewis was 16 year old from a rich family, he was very slender and tall with english roots.
Finally, Lewis finished going down the stairs, however, Michelle was unable to enter the locker at all, her breasts were not fitting at all. Lewis grew mad and went upstairs again, exiting the locker. "So you can't enter... Fine, let me help you" said Lewis with an evil grin on his face. He placed Michelle's back onto one of the locker walls and with his hand her compressed Michelle's breasts against her body, elicting a shout of pain from her but he did't stop untill all of her body was inside the locker. Michelle felt a lot of pressure building on her breasts and started moving as fast as she could downstairs. Lewis followed suit and closed the locker behind him.

When Michelle was done her breasts returned to their normal position and started to hurt again from blood coming back. When she recovered a bit she saw lots of equipment, but not normal equipment. It was like torture equipment. "You are wondering where I took all of this. Well, with help from friends we found this empty basement that only we know exists. We come here at night so we can have our little dungeon set up. All walls are sound-proof so the screams of the girls will not alert anyone. I feel a lot merciful today. I son't whip you, but you'll be riding that thing over there" said Lewis while pointing to a machine.

That machine had 7 rings on the air, two rings connected to the ankles, two connected at the thighs, one at the stomach and two at the wrists. The rings would make the person inside them to be suspended in midair with their bodies being bent at 27° at the waist so the butthol and vagine were exposed, then the arms of the wearer would be pulled back by the wrist rings.

"No way I'm riding that" exclamed Michelle while turning towards Lewis "We just met and you want to torture me right now?"
"Well, this is how it works, you are a woman, women obey men, so you obey me. I don't care at all if we just met or not, get stripped"
Michelle really wanted to kill this guy right here, no one would hear his screams of agony and no one would ever find him, so she took a chance.
Michelle started to walk towards the machine and Lewis followed her, then Michelle turned and punched him right into his nose, but he didn't faint as she had expected. Michelle recieved one punch to her forehead and another one to her left shoulder, fainting her
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