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Cuteness with Sugar



One month after the Ivana event, Nina found another best friend. A classmate who was also called Nina. Except that our magical Nina has chin-lenghted brown hair, and the new Nina has red wavy hair tied into twintails. Red Nina has been trying to get attention from Magical Nina by surprise-tickling her a year before, while they were both 11.

“Nina…” Talked Magical Nina to herself. “Where are you? You’re almost 15 minutes late.”

It was a sunny day in May. Magical Nina waited for Red Nina next to a small soccer field, standing in the grass. It was a nice, sunny day, but it was cold the day before, so it wasn’t too hot.

But then Magical Nina felt a strong, sudden tickle on her hips.

“AHH! NINA! HIHIHI STOP IT!” Screamed Magical Nina as she was reflexively trying to resist.

Magical Nina wore a light-blue, sleeveless shirt with some yellow image on it, and a skirt. Red Nina wore a pink T-shirt with a light-blue glittery writing on it, and stylish torn blue jeans with glittery writings on them.

“Hey, Nina! I’m so sorry I’m late!” Red Nina apologized when she stopped her tickling attempt. “Can I call you Magical Nina when no one is around?”

“Uhh… No. Please don’t do that. It’s a secret…”

“Then how about Manina?”

“That sounds kinda silly haha!”

“It sounds really cute to me!”

‘Uh…’ Thought Magical Nina. ‘Cute? I am cute?’

“Red Nina… But you’re the one who is cute!”

“What?” Red Nina was surprised.

“Well… You know. Cute wavy twintails, big eyes, round face, slim figure…”

“Manina… Are you confessing your love to me?”

“WHAT?! No!”

“Hahaha, I know! I was just kidding!”

‘Well…’ Thought Magical Nina. ‘The way you are treating me all the time kind-of feels like you have a crush on me.’

“Red Nina… Are you sure you were just kidding?”

“Uh? What do you mean?”

“You’re kinda touchy-feely for me. And only me. I mean, I don’t mind.”

‘And I truly don’t mind.’ Thought Magical Nina. ‘I have always wanted to have a girlfriend, and Red Nina is sooo cute!’

“Well…” Shyly said Red Nina. “That would be a little creepy, wouldn’t it?”

“Not to me. To society around, yes, but I won’t tell anybody.”

“Umm… Manina… I just think… you’re… very cute. And also… strong.”

‘Oh no…’ Thought Magical Nina. ‘Why does this situation make me want to do some MAGIC on her?’

“Red Nina… I want to revenge for all the tickles that you gave me last year and recently.”

“What???” Red Nina was in shock. “I think we should start… Like… With a hug or something, and then maybe later… kissing…”

“Nonono!” Magical Nina corrected herself. “Not that! I literally mean, I want to tickle you like crazy! Literally!”

“Oh.” Red Nina was relieved, but also happy. “Go ahead!” She said with a smile as she extended her arms, revealing as much tickling area as possible.”

“I want to do it with magic. I want it to be strong tickling… and powerful…”

“Oh… That sounds good, but… Didn’t you tell me magic can be extremely dangerous?”

“Don’t worry! I’ll be super-careful!”

‘I probably shouldn’t do that again.’ Thought Magical Nina. ‘I already doomed 2 of my best friends for all eternity. But it’s OK for as long as I’m careful enough. I really really really want to do magic on such an adorable girl!’

“Let’s go somewhere where nobody can see!” Magical Nina took Red Nina by the hand, and started walking.

“Uhh…” Said Red Nina with a frightened voice. “OK…”

‘Magical Nina will do magic on me…’ Red Nina thought. ‘One of my dreams are coming true! And I think she could also be my girlfriend? So… Why am I so scared?’

Red Nina moaned from fright as Magical Nina took her to a small artificial river-bed, of a little river that has been closed for 5 years. Then she took the stairs and they entered the riverbed.

“Manina…” Red Nina asked. “Can we please take this slowly? I’m scared of magic. I mean… You told me I should be.”

“This is what I’m going to do, my cute red Nina… I’m going to turn you into a sugar statue and turn you back after 30 minutes.”

“What??? No! Wait!”

“I won’t turn you right now! Don’t worry, I’ll not force you too much.”

“What… What does a sugar statue have to do with tickling?”

“There is this magic that turns people into things that can melt, or be scraped off. But thing is, as you’re melting, it tickles! The more of your body is missing, the larger or deeper area of tickling is. And it doesn’t stop until you’re turned back. It can even last all eternity, even if your material changes or turns into radiation!”

‘Oh no…’ Thought Magical Nina. ‘I said too much… I chose a too extreme method. Now she’ll be scared and… She’ll not even be my friend anymore…’

“I… I can try…” Red Nina frightenly said while looking at the floor, and rubbing her fingers together from thrill. “But please be slow before you transform me, in case I change my mind…”

‘What?’ Magical Nina was surprised. ‘She… Is she really THAT much in love with me?? That sounds like a serious crush if she’s ready to risk so much! But there is no risk. Because THIS TIME, I will not leave her alone! No way is somebody stealing my transformed friend from me again! Nothing can go wrong this time!’

“My Red Nina will be safe. I will be careful.”

“When you turn me back… Will the molten parts of my body turn back too?”

“Oh course they will. It is a… romantic form of magic. Tested many times.”

‘This sounds like the best magic my lovely Magic Nina could do! So why am I so scared? She will not let me be tickled for all eternity! I guess I’m just scared of that tiny possibility of being tickled for all eternity.’

Red Nina raised her head again.

“What do I do, Manina?”

“Well… For tickling to be more effective and require less melting… You’d need to take off your t-shirt and your jeans.”

“OK.” Red Nina turned her back toward Magical Nina because she was embarrassed. She took off her t-shirt, unbuttoned her jeans and took them off too.

Magical Nina was dazzled by the sight of Red Nina’s bare back and bare legs. She really wanted to see more. So she stood behind Red Nina and put her hands on her back.

“Please, Manina… Slowly…”

“Oh… Not yet. I’m just wondering if I can take off your underwear?”

“What?? Ok… Just… Don’t look at me from the front, please. At least until you turn me into that sugar statue. It’s not like the swimming practice that I attend, where we get to see each other naked. This is different… embarrassing… And don’t do anything funny! I will not allow that!”

Magical Nina slowly unbuttoned Red Nina’s bra and dragged it over her shoulders and arms to take it off. Then she lowered her underpants, and Red Nina raised her feet one by one to take it off.

Magical Nina just looked up. ‘Oh… my… What a view… And without hair…’

“Manina… Please stop staring there!”

Magical Nina then stood up. She closed her eyes in order to translate her sight in the FRONT of Red Nina, to see her body from the front. Red Nina strictly prohibited that, but she didn’t know Magical Nina was doing that.

‘Oh for heaven’s sake!’ Thought Magical Nina in amazement. ‘Girls are… So cute from the front!!! Especially Red Nina! I never went to a sport where girls see each other naked in the changing room, but… I should definitely take a swimming hobby or something!!! And… I MUST make Red Nina my girlfriend!’

Then she opened her eyes again and stopped that front sight. She didn’t want Red Nina to be suspicious.

“Manina…” Red Nina asked in a scared voice. “Do whatever you want, just please not on my chest or… near my butt if you know what I’m trying to say. That would be too much if you know what I’m trying to say…”

“Don’t worry.” Magical Nina put her hands behind Red Nina’s shoulders, preparing the spell.

“Manina…” Red Nina sounded even more scared now. “What if the river starts flowing again? Will you be able to save me? And how much would that tickle?”

“They say the artificial river is closed permanently. Don’t worry, red sugar. Everything will be OK.”

Magical Nina kissed Red Nina on her cheek a few times to calm her down.

“Manina… I’m scared… Please give me a moment… I don’t think I’m ready…”

That was the last thing that Red Nina said before she was turned into a dense statue made from white sugar particles.

‘What…?’ Red Nina was a bit shocked.‘ I can’t move… Or breathe… I don’t have to breathe, but… I’M A SUGAR STATUE?? REALLY??’

“You said I can do whatever I want, Red Nina. With limitations, of course. Which is good, licking is the best way to tickle.”

‘Ok… Calm down…’ Red Nina was trying to calm herself down. ‘Magical Nina will tickle you now. With her tongue? Mmmmmgnnnn! It will probably feel a bit lewd! You’re going to love it, and she will turn you back. Calm down and try to enjoy.’

Then she felt Nina’s tongue on her cheek.

‘Ahhh! It tickles!’ She was surprised. ‘Why does it tickle so much? Hihihihihiiii! Aaa, stop it, stop it!’

“You see, cute Nina, now even parts that aren’t ticklish are ticklish. That’s this type of magic.”

‘IIIHIHIHIHI! This is amazing because it’s my Magical Nina doing it, but it tickles too muuuuuch!’

Then Magical Nina went on to lick Red Nina’s neck. As the sugar of Red Nina statue’s neck has been melting, it has just been tickling more and more deeply. Magical Nina also made sure to tickle-torture Red Nina’s arm too, including her fingers.

‘IIIIHHHIIIIII! My cheek still tickles!!! My neck still tickles!!! And you’re not even licking it anymore!!! Ayayayaya stoop it!!! It will not stop tickling until you turn me back!!! Or don’t stop, but please, not full 30 minutes!!! I love this but I’ll go craaaaaazyyyyyyy!!!’

Magical Nina has persistently and strongly sucked Red Nina’s finger as it was tickling more and more. When she stopped, with the edge of her soul sight, Red Nina saw that her finger is gone!

“Your finger will be back after I turn you back. Until then, that part of your soul is tied to the sugar inside my stomach. You know, particles are actually energy, and that’s why this can last for literally all eternity.”

‘IYIYIYIYIYIYIYI! IT ALREADY FEELS LIKE AN ETERNITY IYIYIYIYAYAYAYA! MY BONE TICKLES TOO!’

“But as you can feel, even the inside of your body tickles. Even the inside of your finger. You still feel like you have a finger, but it tickled from skin to bone, including bone!”

‘IIIHHHIIIII! NINA! I ONLY LIKE THIS BECAUSE I KNOW YOU’LL TURN ME BACK! SO PELASE DON’T FAIL TO TURN ME BACK! IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIHHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII.’

Then Magical Nina went on with kissing the Red Nina statue on the lips. Juicily, to make it melt, therefore tickle.

‘TICKLING MY LIPS! MAGIC NINA IS TICKLING MY LIPS! PLEASE, NINA, MAKE EVERYTHING STOP TICKLING AND JUST TICKLE MY LIPS! PLEEEASEE I CAN’T TAKE THIS MUCH LONGER…’

Magical Nina then hugged Red Nina statue from the back and said.

“I will stop now. I don’t want to tickle torture you too intensively. I don’t want you to stop wanting to be my girlfriend. I’ll just hug you for the rest of the 25 minutes. And then, if you still want me, I’ll be your girlfriend and kiss you the right way.”

‘WHAT??? 25 MORE MINUTES??? IYIYIYIYIYIYI NOOOOO! THAT’S TOOO LONG! IHIHIHIHI I CAN’T TAKE THIS ANYMORE!’

Then Nina got a phone call. On her emergency cellphone. Again. ‘Damn it! Well, if I have to go again, I will first turn Red Nina back. I will say I’m in a forest with her or some stuff. I MUST NOT leave her alone this time! I CANNOT eternally doom another friend!’

“Nina, I have to answer this. I am NOT leaving you alone!”

Then Magical Nina went a few steps back, to the staircase, took 2 steps and turned her back towards Red Nina so she wouldn’t hear a secret conversation.

‘IYAYAYAYAYAYA! I HAVE TO BE STRONG! IF I STAY STRONG, MAGIC NINA WILL BE MY GIRLFRIEND!’

As Red Nina was waiting for the call to end, she was suffering, especially without a warm hug on her back.

‘NINAAAAA! PLEASE MAKE IT STOP! UUUHHUUUHHUUUHUUUU! IT TICKLES TOO MUCH AND IT LASTS SO LOOONG! I JUST WANT TO BE YOUR GIRLFRIEND AND KISS WITH YOU! PLEEEASEEE HURRY!! UUUHHHUUUUUHHHHUUUUU!’

Did you ever have somebody tickle you for too long? And laughter turned to crying? Well, Red Nina ended up in that state long ago. Except that it just got worse.

‘UUHHUUUHHUUHHUHUUU!!! NINAAAAAA!!! I LOVE YOU!!! IYIYIYIYIYIYIYIYI!!! I WILL BE STRONG AND KEEP LOVING YOU!!! PLEASE, PLEASE MAKE THIS SHORTER!!! UUUHHHUUUHHHUUU!!! THIS IS TORMENT!!!’



But then something very scary happened. Her feet started tickling. And she saw a tiny amount of water flowing from behind her.

‘Huh? Isn’t this tiny river permanently closed?’

As the water was melting her feet, it tickled.

‘IIIIIIIIIIIIII! IHIHIHIHIIIIII! NINAAAA! NINAAA COME BAAAACK!!! WATER IS MELTING MEEE!!! IT TICKLES MORE AND MORE!!! NINAAA!!!’

An already unbearable tickle torture just got worse. Her feet were tickling, and as they melted, it just extended more and more deeply.

‘IYIYIYIYHUHUHUUUUU!!! NINAAA!!! TURN ME BAAAACK!!! WUHUHUHUHUUUUU!!! I WILL MELT WHOLE AND I’LL BE TICKLED FOR ALL ETERNITY!!! ALL ETERNITY!!! NOOOOOIYIYIYIYIYIYIYIYIYIYI!!! I’M SUFFERING!!! THIS WAS SUPPOSED TO BE ONLY 30 MINUTES, NOT AN INFINITE NUMBER OF YEARS!!!’

Then Magical Nina was done with her call. But as the turned around, she saw water flowing.

“What?? How??”

She got down to the side of the artificial river bed, which was elevated comparing to the rest of it. The water already slid poor Red Nina further away.

Magical Nina immediately levitated her. Red Nina’s feet were tiny.

“Nina!!! I’ll turn you back as quickly as I can!!! You’ll be whole and not tickled anymore!!! I’ll just need to transport you here!!!”

Red Nina was slowly floating, levitated, towards Magical Nina, who was trying to bring her near as soon as possible.

But she didn’t notice the occurrence behind her back. There was a mass of water, at least 1 meter high, rushing forward. It hit Magical Nina’s legs almost throwing her off balance. And since she didn’t have enough time to suddenly levitate Red Nina higher, Red Nina was hit, turned at her feet, into the horizontal position. Water was literally running through her, quickly melting her whole body and reducing her in size.

For some reason, Magical Nina couldn’t levitate her any higher anymore. So she just drew her towards herself as quickly as she could.

A small ball of sugar ended up in Magical Nina’s hands.

“That’s fine!” Magical Nina screamed happily. ”That is enough solid sugar to turn you back, fully, undamaged! Yes! I did powerful magic on such a cute friend and, for the first time, they will not be imprisoned for all eternity!!!”

But then a fish jumped out of the river. And kicked the ball of sugar back into the water.

“Uhh… Nina… Red Nina…”

Yes. What was left of Red Nina has disappeared back into the river, flowing forward and melting. Red Nina was melted whole, and… well… Every little piece of her body, from inside to outside, was torturously tickling. And Magical Nina couldn’t save her anymore.

Magical Nina climbed out of the river bed feeling like a total retard again.

“Fish… Why did you do that, fish? And how? How did you jump exactly at the small sugar ball of adorable, innocent, Red Nina…? How is such a coincidence even possible??? It is your fault, stupid fish!!! If I ever find you…”

But then she saw something. A sign, right next to the stairs for entering the river bed.

‘It says… The river will be reactivated on May 5th… Really? The warning was just in front of us? Next to the stairs???’

Red Nina didn’t see the sign because she was scared, and madly in love. And Magical Nina didn’t see the sign because she’s a wizard, in other words a magic addict, too obsessed to notice her surroundings.

‘It’s my fault… I was doing the magic, I should have checked for the signs… Or news…’

As said before, even though fates like that are horrific to the core, wizards are kind-of more understanding and accepting of them. Magic affects you in that way. That’s why Magical Nina will not end up in a mental institution, she’ll just feel bad.

‘So… First Ana… Then Ivana… And now, Red Nina feels tickle torture, the worst kind, forever and ever and ever… I really wanted Red Nina to be my girlfriend… She was so adorable, and good, and helpful… She didn’t deserve this… Well, none of them did, but… Why, of all people, Nina??? Why can’t I just do super-powerful magic on somebody and then have it all turn back and be OK???’

‘I promised myself I’d be more careful. Wait… Was I? I didn’t leave her this time. Just made a small, few minute mistake. Yes… I am getting better. Maybe, some day, I will have a close friend for more than a few months, without dooming them for all eternity! Yes… I’m getting better at being careful!’

‘Oh, and I better join a swimming club or something. Wherever girls undress in the locker room. It sucks so much that Red Nina will never be my girlfriend, but they will remind me of her cuteness… Ahhh, I love girls so much, I never knew I would!’
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