oh and rando anonymous, both i guess

i think my grammer is pretty good (or at least no one has bitched about it) but im mostly looking for "hey this needs more detail like *yadda yadda yadda* i get wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy too into worldbuilding (ie i got a Castle thing where I spent a couple hours thinking/researching on how females should be numbered without actually writing a single word of fucking) so anyone who wants to say HEY LESS BACGROUND SHIT MOAR PENIS IN PUSSY SHIT is welcomed

THAT IS ALL