I don't usually read non-con stories, but at least there were lolis, so I thought I'd give it a try. It could indeed use some more detail, but short as it is is okay too. Maybe it was actually the lack of detail on the girls' suffering, the physiological part of it in particular, that let me take the non-consensual nature of the story more lightly and be able to enjoy it nevertheless, even if not as much as if it was consensual, but that's just my taste.

> In general, the more detail the better...

Right, I'm sure you said that somewhere before and then turned down my archery idea for having too much detail.
Speaking of which, any news on the Angel story?