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Glad to see you back there! It's always a pleasure to find a new story about some girls happily playing with their inner bits.
That idea of writing in pair seem very cool to me. I'll hope you will have a lot of fun doing so, so we can see a lot of your excellent stories.
Just one question: is the zombie apocalypse the same as in “A Cunning Plan”, and if so, is a cross over envisaged. Or even better, are this story and A Cunning Plan both parts of a huge saga where the intertwined yarn of countless characters destiny become the fabric of a dramatic masterpiece? In other words, are you writing the Game of Thrones of non-lethal guro? Hushh..., don't answer the two last ones, just let me dream.

On the suggestion side, I like Astro idea of having some animal climbing in on of the girl. It could also be fun that the end up choose to let the snake dwell in their body and call it a pet.

I'm a bit disappointed that the girls didn't found Janet mom, but I guess that will happen in a future issue.

Something else that may be fun is to introduce a male non-zombi survivor that for some reason, would end up stuck with the two girl. Clara would be interested to have sex with him out of curiosity but not Jannet that know what she like. The man would be on his side very interested in running away from this overly friendly zombi. But Jannet would realize, to her great surprise, that she actually feel a very strong attraction for this man, but she realize that the appetite the presence of the man arouse in her is of the literal kind. Jannet never was attracted to men but maybe it's because she never considered the question from a gastronomical point of view. The guy would have to try to use Clara initial interest in hop to convince the girls that devouring him would be a waste.

As always thank for your great work!

(And sorry for the ones that came here expecting a new issue ?)
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