Thanks for the kind words, Abby in the original version was 14 and I hadn't really planned on her being snuffed but Dolcettish still didn't like her being around naked women as they still call it being involved. I don't mean to rag on the site, I love the work some of the people do over there.

Abby's inclusion in Chapter Five was totally last minute, it was just meant to be a generic girl but when I was told to age Abby up I just went for it...

Still, glad you like it