This story actually bothered me, and kept me awake last night. I couldn't digest the ending and I had mixed feelings about it. Oddly enough, I come here FOR consensual, so this should be right up my alley. I think the hard stop for me was just how well it was written, how the build up was slow and fleshed out, and how it really FELT like a real person consenting to the end. It was VERY good, but the more I thought about it the more I tossed and turned.



So my kudos to you for writing a story so well that it actually made me think and need to digest.