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Well I am glad you liked it. I sometimes think gurochan is not the place for the work I am doing now, but so far it seems I was wrong.

Consensual stories are very nice, but they are also hard, because you can very easily fall into a cliche or an unrealistic character development (not that this is real, but lets say that its reasonable).

If you want to read a few more like this, I can recommend you "The Hangman".

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