>>14010
I checked your other stories and they are ok (skin suit part in that zombie one was HOT) but they are 90% happy "noone important dies or get hurt for reall" kind. In this one at least Lara body is actualy dead even if she respawn in a new one. I prefer my dead bodies to be dead. :) But despite that and how silly(if not borderline retarded- sory but its true) some of the characters act in those other stories they are well made and writen.