Awesome feedback, guys. Keep it coming, i'll probably read everything.


>>15631
Will do… Eventually. Gotta get him away from the vikings first

>>15632
Yeah, made the decision/mistake of moving the backstory to chapter 2 to try to give Chapter 1 a faster pace. Backstory will be in the next one.

>>15633
On the one hand, i'm not against some levity, but it could definitely be better spaced out to maintain some atmosphere. Might remove, but more likely will just make it more rare.

>>15634
As I said, backstory incoming, and vioce lines will be fewer (tho, i like the idea of putting in the odd latin phrase).
But is there anything specific that causes confusion? Confusion is the last thing I want to cause.

>>15635
Speaking of confusion.
Yes, a funny comment, thank you. But I tried to make it clear that her axe had gotten stuck
in the pile of bodies.

As for the back story. That will likely need to give him a name. My WIP name has been "Viktorius". I know it's a liiittle bit cheesy, but anyone got thoughts on it?