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>>15814

Thanks so much for the feedback. It's very welcome indeed, especially as it's so positive.

>there's already plenty of stories here with no plot and boring snuff,


That's partly was drove me. I was reading stuff, and thought, "This is lame, hold my beer." I did enjoy the Dolcett Girls story, but it was a bit to much plot and not enough action for my taste. The scene in the meat grinder was delicious though.

> I hope you want to write more!


I absolutely do. I'm enjoying this far more than I imagined I would.

>I would love to request a character, as long as that character also interests you:


Funnily enough, an idea for one of the victims in the next part of the story was a Japanese girl, so Miku fits in perfectly with that plan. Expect to meet her around chapter 7. (I think). I'm just putting the final touches to chapter 5, and chapter 6 is well under way, so hopefully you won't have to wait to long to see what becomes of her.
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