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Lauren-Princess to the Tamaraneans, a race of aliens warriors, whose power is derived from their emotions, Kori was next in line to be queen

Alice-But cause we need conflict, her sister Komand'r was all like “fuck off sis” and sold her to slave traders. After their ship stopped at earth, she broke free, defeated her captors, and took their ships name for herself, becoming Starfire!

Lauren-Real Name Koriand'r, age 18-23, height 6’4, weight 158 lbs, cup size estimated B, don’t let her feminine appearance fool you, she is a force to be reckoned with

Alice-That's cause she's Tamaranean. This race of people have immense super strength, speed, reflexes, and the ability to fly…why do all sentient races besides humans have all these super powers

Lauren-Not only this, she can project ultraviolet energy both as bolts fired from her hand, and more powerful beams fired from her eyes

Alice-…wait a sec, super strength, flight, eye beams, comes from an alien planet…she's just sexy superman! And we already have Supergirl!

Lauren-*adjusts glasses agreeably* strengthening your point, similar to Superman she can absorb ultraviolet energy, as well as having a similar ability to Clark's Super Flare, called Stellar Nova where she let’s lose all her UV energy at once

Alice-I just like Clark she knows plenty of her native races martial arts!

Lauren-As you can imagine with all this, she's pulled of some impressive things. She's survived an exploding stars, can fly faster than the speed of sound, and has even beat her sister Blackfire

Alice-Buuuut she's not perfect. She's extremely naive, and has trouble understanding earth culture. But when your main weakness is that you don't get people, your doing pretty good for yourself. But will her lack of people skills spell her doom when she faces Captain Marvel? Or will she reign supreme?
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