Don't know if I qualify as legendary, but I'm flattered somebody derived some inspiration from my stories. I agree with Poguemahone that you should post more of your stuff, because we can always use more stories in this weird little sub-genre of ours, especially if they're well-written like this one.

The skinning was nicely described (and always appreciated), the personalities are established about as much as a story of this length will allow, and I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes. Keep up the good work!

Looking forward to the rest of your stories, and possibly even a direct sequel to this one? I wonder what they'll make her take off next…