Amazing start. Was a little short for my taste but what is there is amazing. I agree with JIP that a sequel would be great. The only advice I can give to you on that front is to take things slowly and gradually; don't go all in and ruin any chances at a continuation because you exhausted all your ideas on one chapter. JIP and Poguemahone do this really well by slowly building up to the extremes instead of just starting out there.

Definitely hoping to see more from you.